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I Always Want Too Much

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yes, i know....
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You always see me as

sweetness

and purity

and in some way a threat to your peace.

Yet I know the impossibility of true danger

due to distance

and circumstances

and obligation.

All of these things

make you safe and secure

in your life.

But my heart wants you

to recognize my desire for you

to honor it,

to be glad of it,

to allow yourself

to desire me in return.

I laugh as I say that

because I assume so much.

Do I want you to pretend desire

just to make me feel valued?

What is it that I really want from you?

I know.

I always want too much.

I want you

to kiss me

to hold my hand

to touch my breast

to show me

that I can be an object of desire.

An object of YOUR desire.

Too much....

Yes, I know.

But a girl can dream.

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Mystic_Angel_77
Posted 12 Jan 2013 14:38
very touching poem, well written

buttercup2u
Posted 21 Dec 2012 18:14
So eloquently put. The feelings, the thoughts -- my feelings, my thoughts ... exactly.

Talentedtongue
Posted 19 Jul 2012 23:02
But my heart wants you....and.....yes.....a girl can dream. Well we all dream don't we? Lovely, simply lovely!

angeldust
Posted 17 Jun 2012 12:45
Very very warming poem

HK4167
Posted 12 Jun 2012 22:48
Honest, touching and so beautifully written. Your feeling is very well expressed Laura. Love your work as always.

etairay
Posted 12 Jun 2012 17:23
thank you love it ..felt it ..saw it ..true & real why is life soo hard sometimes

ArtMan
Posted 12 Jun 2012 10:24
Beautiful.

playsit
Posted 12 Jun 2012 06:02
Sugah... I feel your desire and it aches. Beautifully written. By the way, some of us guys feel the same way.

PhilAnders
Posted 12 Jun 2012 01:58
Very touching and well said.

alexmarch
Posted 11 Jun 2012 23:02
Never too much. Just perfect. An object of desire? Any answer but "yes" is the wrong answer, especially after reading such moving words.

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nazhinaz
Posted 11 Jun 2012 22:08
A girl can dream and attain. Beautiful Sugah. 5

Buz
Posted 11 Jun 2012 19:22
I really did enjoy this LauraLee. The words capture true longing. Great writing!

ShyVixen
Posted 11 Jun 2012 17:56
To be the object of ones desire, isn't this what many of us crave? We all want to take that leap of faith and hope our feelings are returned. Beautifully done.

Sisyphus
Posted 11 Jun 2012 15:47
So lovely, so honest and direct. For dreams to come true, you must dream. I feel the longing in this poem to have what you know you want and your question-- is it too much creates the painful tension of not knowing. Very moving poem...

DLizze
Posted 11 Jun 2012 15:36
Not too much at all. We all need to court a little danger. And if it becomes life-changing, then we can truly say we have embraced life and all it has to offer, with gusto. We should all be so lucky to have an epitah that simply says, He truly lived.
 

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