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I Am

I am a woman.

I am love.

I am friendship.

I am giving.

I am silly.

I am trusting.

I am submissive.

I am sexy.

I am true.

I am adorable.

I am blushing.

I am jealous.

I am demanding.

I am bitchy.

I am mouthy.

I am a cry-baby.

When you say you love me,

Please love all of them.
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StillUndecided
Posted 07 Jun 2013 06:24
You overused nothing. That was wonderful. I now know exactly what you are x
whistleblower
Posted 06 Jun 2013 08:25
Sure, repetition is used in poetry but there's a limit to everything. You over used it in this case and thus it made it go down and down. If you are to do something like this again then find different ways to communicate your different sides. The idea is good, but the execution doesn't stay up to par.
Masculine
Posted 26 May 2013 11:31
Very sweet!!!
HK4167
Posted 25 May 2013 22:28
Wonderful...your feeling is well expressed in this nicely structured poem. Great work!
ineedfun1
Posted 25 May 2013 15:21
True love you mickie

Poppet
Posted 24 May 2013 12:17
Isn't this the truth? We as humans have many sides, and people need to remember that. This is really good, Mickie. I'm proud of you.
Leiza350
Posted 24 May 2013 08:45
another master peace written with hands of a loving person.
I love your sole cuz it brings out what love really is ....
MrTLWolf
Posted 24 May 2013 08:36
Very nice, Mickie.
Sol_Invictus
Posted 24 May 2013 02:27
Very nice.

buttercup2u
Posted 24 May 2013 01:18
Well put! Amazing how many facets we have some of them are easy to love, others not so much, but you are right, to truly lovely someone you must love all of them.

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nazhinaz
Posted 24 May 2013 00:32
Beautiful. How about using, "I am a Girl instead of a woman? 5
Enaw
Posted 23 May 2013 21:00
loved it, was wonderful hun
TonyT
Posted 23 May 2013 20:49
uh-oh I hear you roaring "I am WOMAN!" loud and clear! And you say it very very well! I liked it a lot hon. :-)
desire_longing
Posted 23 May 2013 19:57
We love all your beautiful facets and flaws like a diamond. You are beautiful and strong. Excellent.
Babygirllew
Posted 23 May 2013 19:47
I love you LOVE
subpam33
Posted 23 May 2013 19:26
still wondering how you missed ditzy lol loved it babe kisses
subpam33
Posted 23 May 2013 19:26
still wondering how you missed ditzy lol loved it babe kisses
Jethro
Posted 23 May 2013 19:17
Very good Mickie. You are a wonderful lady.

facsuper
Posted 23 May 2013 18:16
I am your friend.......Good job keep it up
Wdawg
Posted 23 May 2013 18:06
I do love all of them... and I love you!

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TxPrincess
Posted 23 May 2013 18:06
Very Very Very good.....did i say very good.....kisses
 

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