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I Crave...you, just YOU!

Meeting someone new and craving him
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I Crave....you, just YOU!

I crave your words on my screen

I crave the tingling feeling I feel for you

I crave the sight of your green eyes focused on mine

I crave the sound of your voice close to my ear

I crave to hear your laughter when we are together

I crave thoughts of you floating in my head

I crave the warmth of your touch

I crave the scent of your skin

I crave your hardness pressed against my body

I crave your body, mind, and soul

I crave for the day we fall in love

Most of all I crave you..just YOU!

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theplayer
Posted 06 Feb 2013 18:34
Well done darlin. I knew you could do it!

Mambo_King
Posted 04 Feb 2013 23:28
Hey Pink, that was bang on and captured that feeling of hunger and desire. I really enjoyed the poem and have no doubt that you wrote it from a place of experience, BRAVO! Looking forward to reading your stories!

nazhinaz
Posted 23 Jan 2013 08:28
Enjoyed as felt the feel of loving touch.5

Roxanna
Posted 10 Jan 2013 15:41
The feelings rang true. I have to admit that I am on the fence about the repetition format you applied. Mayhap it will grow on me ...

Mazza
Posted 10 Jan 2013 12:52
Ah even better on a second read

Lovely sentiments!

5

CurlyGirly
Posted 10 Jan 2013 11:06
I know this feeling well. sigh Very well done!

Hotstuff
Posted 10 Jan 2013 10:44
Beautifully worded poem...very well done in expressing your desires.
High 5+++

ShyVixen
Posted 10 Jan 2013 10:12
There is no better feeling. You expressed your emotions wonderfully.

Cinner
Posted 10 Jan 2013 09:54
I really felt your craving. That made it real. Thoroughly enjoyed...thank you and looking for more.

pinklipgloss70
Posted 10 Jan 2013 09:38
Thank you Rick, I really do appreciate the positive feedback..I hope to be writing some stories as well.

asleep
Posted 10 Jan 2013 08:39
I just jumped in and read this w/o realizing it was your FIRST poem. You really did a nice job...and it being a "first" makes it all the more special!!

Rick

asleep
Posted 10 Jan 2013 08:35
That was VERY WELL written...and it expresses the longing, the desire, the CRAVING of one heart/soul for another in terms that are clear and concise. I really REALLY liked this one! Thank you so much for sharing this. "5" ++++ all the way. Gotta add this to my favorites!!
 

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