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I Cried Tonight

I love him so...
I cried as I drove home tonight

But you didn’t know.

I left my heart out in the air

And it cracked as it fell.

But it’s not the first time

My heart has been damaged or contused.

Can you not see

The pain that seeps out of me?

Sometimes I think I love too much,

And, while you love, it’s not as deep.

Should I stay and be in pain,

Or should I end it now while I am still sane?

I saw a glimpse of what used to be

When you returned last week.

My heart leapt and beat a million beats,

But now it’s slowed to a steady, simmering pace.

Do I no longer stir your blood

Or cause your body to heat?

If so, please can we end this now

And say once it was good?

I cried as I drove home tonight

But you didn’t know.

I left my heart out in the air

And it shattered as it fell.

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Posted 08 Sep 2013 18:50
Such a beautiful poem. I can feel your sadness and pain. 5
Posted 14 Jul 2013 02:57
Beautiful ... i felt every pain and tears ... thank you for sharing
Posted 28 May 2013 22:04
So sad, but still beautiful.
Posted 12 May 2013 02:17
I feel your anguish.

Posted 02 Jan 2013 16:11
Hauntingly sad and beautifully written.
Posted 03 Sep 2012 03:35
Very touching poem.
Posted 26 Aug 2012 22:29
And my heart shattered as I read your poem.
Posted 26 Aug 2012 10:52
So heart felt...
Posted 20 Aug 2012 08:06
Painfully beautiful. You capture the heart of your reader. 5+

Posted 04 Jul 2012 13:09
beautifully written! (as always!)

Posted 03 Jul 2012 08:01
The shattering heart...what a tragic and vivid and familiar subject to write about. This was achingly, beautifully done.
Posted 02 Jul 2012 23:39
Beautiful, honest with real intense heartbroken emotions. Thank you for sharing this with us, and all the best wishes for the healing.
Posted 02 Jul 2012 17:55
wow thank you love it ..felt it ..honest real crazy & a roller coaster as we dont want it

Posted 02 Jul 2012 17:52
Very beautiful. Heartfelt.
Posted 02 Jul 2012 16:34
This was beautiful and heart wrenching all at once. You are an exceptional writer Mare. Thank you!
Posted 02 Jul 2012 16:28
i felt...felt..what u gut wrenchong...

Posted 02 Jul 2012 13:51
Very well expressed. I have been crushed like this. Yes, I love too much. Yes, you should end it while still sane. It is the only way. To 1WomanMan - it is not only women who are hurt in this way. There are some very cruel women about.

Posted 02 Jul 2012 12:01
Extremely heartfelt and passionate x

Posted 02 Jul 2012 09:06
I know too many who have been crushed like this. I hope this was a healing poem for you. It is beautifully worded.
Posted 02 Jul 2012 08:22
I love this poem...Inspires me to write one of my own..Thank you!!
Posted 02 Jul 2012 07:48
Very nice indeed!

Posted 02 Jul 2012 06:58
Beautiful and touching - thank you for sharing.
Posted 02 Jul 2012 06:27
"And it shattered as it fell"... Au.. Sad, heartbreaking but beautifully put! X
Posted 02 Jul 2012 06:18
Beautifully written...heartfelt and full of emotion..."Can you not see The pain that seeps out of me".

Posted 02 Jul 2012 05:59
Painfully beautiful. Our mind and our heart challenge one another, they are often conflicted making it hard to move on. Thank you for sharing mare.
Posted 02 Jul 2012 05:54
"i left my heart out in the air"....oh my... yes...

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