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I Cried Tonight

I love him so...
I cried as I drove home tonight

But you didn’t know.

I left my heart out in the air

And it cracked as it fell.

But it’s not the first time

My heart has been damaged or contused.

Can you not see

The pain that seeps out of me?

Sometimes I think I love too much,

And, while you love, it’s not as deep.

Should I stay and be in pain,

Or should I end it now while I am still sane?

I saw a glimpse of what used to be

When you returned last week.

My heart leapt and beat a million beats,

But now it’s slowed to a steady, simmering pace.

Do I no longer stir your blood

Or cause your body to heat?

If so, please can we end this now

And say once it was good?

I cried as I drove home tonight

But you didn’t know.

I left my heart out in the air

And it shattered as it fell.

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Comments(26)


Mysteria27
Posted 08 Sep 2013 18:50
Such a beautiful poem. I can feel your sadness and pain. 5
mayan
Posted 14 Jul 2013 02:57
Beautiful ... i felt every pain and tears ... thank you for sharing
Perfectbodyforsex
Posted 28 May 2013 22:04
So sad, but still beautiful.
Aletheia
Posted 12 May 2013 02:17
I feel your anguish.

CurlyGirly
Posted 02 Jan 2013 16:11
Hauntingly sad and beautifully written.
SandraDeeisHorny
Posted 03 Sep 2012 03:35
Very touching poem.
flytoomuch
Posted 26 Aug 2012 22:29
And my heart shattered as I read your poem.
spearone
Posted 26 Aug 2012 10:52
So heart felt...
EroticElegance
Posted 20 Aug 2012 08:06
Painfully beautiful. You capture the heart of your reader. 5+

VanGogh
Posted 04 Jul 2012 13:09
beautifully written! (as always!)

TXGirl
Posted 03 Jul 2012 08:01
The shattering heart...what a tragic and vivid and familiar subject to write about. This was achingly, beautifully done.
HK4167
Posted 02 Jul 2012 23:39
Beautiful, honest with real intense heartbroken emotions. Thank you for sharing this with us, and all the best wishes for the healing.
etairay
Posted 02 Jul 2012 17:55
wow thank you love it ..felt it ..honest real crazy & a roller coaster ..life as we dont want it

Buz
Posted 02 Jul 2012 17:52
Very beautiful. Heartfelt.
Bad_4You
Posted 02 Jul 2012 16:34
This was beautiful and heart wrenching all at once. You are an exceptional writer Mare. Thank you!
blazestcyr
Posted 02 Jul 2012 16:28
i felt...felt..what u wrote...wow...sooo gut wrenchong...

Victordean
Posted 02 Jul 2012 13:51
Very well expressed. I have been crushed like this. Yes, I love too much. Yes, you should end it while still sane. It is the only way. To 1WomanMan - it is not only women who are hurt in this way. There are some very cruel women about.

sweet_as_candy
Posted 02 Jul 2012 12:01
Extremely heartfelt and passionate x

playsit
Posted 02 Jul 2012 09:06
I know too many who have been crushed like this. I hope this was a healing poem for you. It is beautifully worded.
Tatum23
Posted 02 Jul 2012 08:22
I love this poem...Inspires me to write one of my own..Thank you!!
ArtMan
Posted 02 Jul 2012 07:48
Very nice indeed!

CuriousButterfly
Posted 02 Jul 2012 06:58
Beautiful and touching - thank you for sharing.
Kiki
Posted 02 Jul 2012 06:27
"And it shattered as it fell"... Au.. Sad, heartbreaking but beautifully put! X
velvety
Posted 02 Jul 2012 06:18
Beautifully written...heartfelt and full of emotion..."Can you not see The pain that seeps out of me".

ShyVixen
Posted 02 Jul 2012 05:59
Painfully beautiful. Our mind and our heart challenge one another, they are often conflicted making it hard to move on. Thank you for sharing mare.
LauraLee_sugah
Posted 02 Jul 2012 05:54
"i left my heart out in the air"....oh my... yes...
 

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