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I Miss Us

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I miss your lips when they touched mine

I miss your kisses they were so divine

I miss your hand in mine our fingers entwined

I miss your smile that lit up your whole face

I miss your fingers that my silhouette you traced

I miss your laugh when I did something dumb

I miss your tongue that licked me & made me cum

I miss your warm body lying in bed next to me

I miss your good morning kiss as sweet as it can be

I miss your voice that was so loving and kind

I miss your love making that blew my mind

I miss your “trigger words” when I would cuss

But the thing I miss most is we are no longer, “us.”
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Nordic_Pixie
Posted 20 Apr 2013 12:49
Know the feeling of missing so well...

sxaddited60
Posted 27 Mar 2013 10:29
I miss just knowing you are out there
I miss that smile, that smile in my corner

I just miss... you

Banes1
Posted 26 Mar 2013 14:20
Well written and very sad.

Tashtego
Posted 14 Feb 2013 15:52
"I miss your laugh when I did something dumb" so bittersweet. So tender and real. Very nice.

pinklipgloss70
Posted 02 Feb 2013 07:38
Its quite lovely and direct..I like it very much!

shado786
Posted 28 Jan 2013 01:48
well expressed

wildchicka
Posted 20 Jan 2013 18:35
Awesome!

LOVES4PLAY
Posted 19 Jan 2013 14:18
JUST thinking about my son , & missing him so much.
after reading "I MISS US"again I'm sadder now
Joan I've always said that if i could take your pain away i would..
I HOPE IT WORKED.. JOEL

TJRogue
Posted 17 Jan 2013 07:50
As always Joan, you touch the heart. It's wonderful.

Buz
Posted 14 Jan 2013 18:51
Very expressive Joan. I can feel your passion. Excellent writing!

1lush
Posted 14 Jan 2013 08:57
Great job! True expresssion of feelings.

HK4167
Posted 13 Jan 2013 10:44
What a beautiful poem with heartfelt emotions. Well done. Totally worth a 5.

PhilAnders
Posted 13 Jan 2013 02:01
Bravo, Joan!

True feelings so well expressed

ArtMan
Posted 12 Jan 2013 20:08
Very well written!

LOVES4PLAY
Posted 12 Jan 2013 18:23
While we can only give a score of five .. You continue to amaze us with your ability to draw on our emotions & interweave them with your own..

Joan you are an awesome writer Joel

Jayne33
Posted 12 Jan 2013 03:49
As always great writing, a very touching bit of writing :-)

nazhinaz
Posted 11 Jan 2013 22:42
US for me means so much Joan. Thanks for a beautiful addition to US.

mymaria
Posted 11 Jan 2013 21:20
I love how you use words. You poured your heart out to us. I feel your loss through your words. I wish I could be with you. My lover told me to read this poem. He was right about you. He genuinely cares about you. Your writing is so beautiful and touched my heart. Thank you for sharing with us.

LauraLee_sugah
Posted 11 Jan 2013 20:47
lovely

ArtAngel
Posted 11 Jan 2013 20:46
Well written..your emotions flow freely here..a great outlet for such strong passion

Peter_Pan
Posted 11 Jan 2013 19:10
Good job.

fuckedsilly
Posted 11 Jan 2013 17:46
That was very touching. Brought tears to my eyes. Well done.

Gramps
Posted 11 Jan 2013 17:28
"Us". Do important

shexdensmore
Posted 11 Jan 2013 16:22
How sweet and sad. Well done.

Mystic_Angel_77
Posted 11 Jan 2013 15:36
very deep and beautiful

frogprince
Posted 11 Jan 2013 15:27
Joanie, once again you score. Your lament brought a tear to my eye. I could feel your loss not only in your words but in your heart. You always have the words to express your feelings. Everything you write reveals a little of you. You are sensitive and care for a few close friends. I wish there were some way to help you through this. What can I do. ILY

Kal-El85
Posted 11 Jan 2013 14:40
Longing can lead to great emotions. Love the straight forwardness of this piece. Great stuff, Joan.

Jethro
Posted 11 Jan 2013 13:48
Straight forward and to the point. Once again Joan you allow us to feel your emotions. Great job my friend.
 

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