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Who really sees all you are?
I see a man

“I see a man” says The Boss 
“works well and hard, he does a good job”

“I see a man” says the Casual Friend 
“A little quiet, seems okay, easy company”

“I see a man” says the Total Stranger 
“He looks kind of laid back, but hard to get to know”

“I see a man” says the Very Good Mate 
“He's alright, a good laugh, the sort you can trust” 

“I see a man” say the Girls in the pub 
“Not bad looking, bit of alright, though maybe not long term”

“I see a man” says the Family 
“He's not turned out bad, though he could do better”

“I see a man” says the Lover 
“He's special to me, not only as a good friend but as a loving partner too”

“I see a man” says the Person On Lush

“He’s sexy and funny, I like what he does and how he chats”

“I see a man” says The Man 
“They all see parts of me, but only I see the whole...”

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Comments(8)

Navin
Posted 19 Jun 2012 09:08
Simple but smart. Great insight. Nice work.

playsit
Posted 21 May 2012 08:44
I love reading works that force inner reflection. Thank you.
etairay
Posted 21 May 2012 04:45
Thank you love it ..can see it
naughtyone
Posted 19 May 2012 13:11
"I see a poet", says the reader, "with imagination and clarity."
tnblue
Posted 19 May 2012 11:47
excellent
LauraLee_sugah
Posted 19 May 2012 09:05
i lik this philosophical poem buti think it is rare to find a person who even sees himself accurately as a whole... enjoyed this very much...
Sisyphus
Posted 19 May 2012 08:11
I like the cadence and pattern created. Yes, the irony of being seen from different perspectives yet only the person who can see from inside perceives the whole. Each of the views of the man is distinct based on their experience of him. Interesting and perceptive, sad also because he is unseen for who he is.
Gramps
Posted 19 May 2012 07:30
Beautiful and thought provoking. Who am I?
 

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