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I Thought Of You Again Today
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HiddenTalent

I Thought Of You Again Today

I thought of you again today.
You appeared unbidden like a thief in the dark;
You entered my mind to twist the stake in my heart.

I thought of you again today.
Words uttered by a stranger unknown
Still cause pain that I thought I'd outgrown.

I thought of you again today.
If they say that it takes time to heal,
Why is it only pain I feel?

I thought of you again today,
Of all the good times that we had,
Before our love became so sad.

I thought of you again today,
And how you turned each little dream
To something that made my heart scream.

I thought of you again today,
As I wearily climbed the stairs to bed.
I found you once again... There... In my head.

I thought of you again today.
Why can't you release this hold on me,
So once again, I can be alone and free?

I thought of you again today,
And dream that a fresh new start,
Can overcome this broken heart.
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Comments(15)

oursecret
Posted 24 Oct 2013 20:04
The pain of a lost love or a child never goes away.. I'll read this many times over...Thank you..
LauraLee_sugah
Posted 17 Oct 2013 16:59
simple words... so sad but then hopeful. nicely done

ShyVixen
Posted 17 Oct 2013 12:24
Your words are touching and pierced me as I felt the pain having been there before myself. You wrote with such strong emotions, I could sense your loss. Beautifully crafted.

Poppet
Posted 12 Oct 2013 18:57
The true words that are spoken here are like shards of glass embedded into my soul, heart, mind and skin. It's as though it's taken from my life. Each word reminded me how true this is. It's overwhelming, powerful, sad, and heart wrenching. You've done well, HT. ♥

trinket
Posted 12 Oct 2013 04:41
I loved this and it brought a little tear to my eye HT. There is no worse feeling than a broken, screaming heart. Your poem captured that feeling. p.s. I love a man who gives good punctuation

SugarBaby2013
Posted 12 Oct 2013 04:27
Simply beautiful...I really enjoyed it. Please write more.

Saga
Posted 11 Oct 2013 23:32
I very much enjoyed this poem. I love the way you wrote it, its pure and full of genuine emotions. I adore this sentence, "Why can't you release this hold on me, So once again, I can be alone and free?" Well done, I look forward to seeing more poems from you.

Strangerlyd
Posted 11 Oct 2013 22:50
Beautiful poem, so much feelings...

Mysteria27
Posted 11 Oct 2013 17:17
I enjoyed your poem. You told a nice story from start to finish. Your words are very passionate and lovely. Beautiful. 5
Freesia
Posted 11 Oct 2013 16:31
Beautiful Poem...I really enjoyed it. Looks like that talent isn't hidden after all!
Thrill_Seeker18
Posted 11 Oct 2013 15:44
Well done.

CurlyGirly
Posted 11 Oct 2013 15:38
Beautiful job. We've all been there before and can feel your pain. Can't wait to read more of your poems.

Mazza
Posted 11 Oct 2013 15:34
I love this!
It's simple and yet there's a depth of emotion that one can really relate to...
You should write more poems xxx
bat
Posted 11 Oct 2013 15:08
Very well written! I feel your pain. Thank you Dasiey for bringing it to my attention

Shylass
Posted 11 Oct 2013 14:32
What a beautiful, simple poem. And yet, there are touches of deep elegance, such as, "I found you once again... There... In my head". The pauses are wonderful, leading me to explore the recesses of love lost and yet presently explored. For a first poem ever, this is a beauty! Well done! I hope to see more in the future.
 

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