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I Wish I Saw What You See

Not really a love poem... it's about a friend.
You tell me these things I don't understand
They boggle my mind and make my soul smile
To think that someone like you
Would see someone like me
And see what you say you see.

You tell me I'm Cute...
I see my own chubby cheeks
My typically pale complexion...

You say I'm Funny...
I hear only my old desire to be truly accepted
My own trepidation at letting others in

You call me Kind...
I only see an outcast
Who knows true cruelty...

You profess me to be Sweet...
All I am is honest
I would never hurt you

You think I'm Sexy...
I see excess flab
An unremarkable body
An average appearance...

You say that I'm Loving...
How else could I treat you?
I don't understand your inexplicable affection...

You see me as Amazing...
I see a mere mortal
Of flaws and sin
A humble creature of flesh and blood...

To use your words, even "so damn adorable"...
I simply cannot understand
What your eyes see in me...

I wish I saw what you see.
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Posted 27 May 2013 19:23
sentiments so true for a lot of people.
Posted 03 Apr 2013 09:18
Extraordinarily Beautiful!
Posted 30 Nov 2012 12:56
aww how honest
Posted 29 Nov 2012 05:05
Simply you are Amazing. its beautiful Jason.

Posted 29 Nov 2012 01:59
Aw that was gorgeous, so honest and open...
Believe it, you ARE those lovely things x

Posted 29 Nov 2012 00:57
There never seems to be a way to truly see ourselves through another's eyes. We can only take their words and hold them close. This captures the odd feeling of acceptance of what we're told, whether we can understand why or not, and I wish I could be as at peace about myself and what I am told, as you have managed to write it here.

Posted 29 Nov 2012 00:54
This was amazing and beautifully written. Thank you for sharing this. Loved it!! I wish I could score higher then 5+

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