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I Won't Let You

received my separation papers today...trying to look forward
I Won’t Let You

We made promises of forever
But our love you did betray
You tore my heart in pieces
But I won’t fade away

We shared so many laughs
But abruptly left me in tears
You shook me to the core
But I won’t regret the years

We looked to the future together
But you had other hidden schemes
You left me feeling lonely
But I won’t let you steal my dreams

We close the final chapter
And I look forward to someone new
You no longer live in my heart
Because I won’t let you

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Mystic_Angel_77
Posted 01 Aug 2012 10:14
Very touching....Well done

beinggood
Posted 27 Mar 2012 05:16
It touched my heart...beautiful and well done...a 5

Buz
Posted 12 Mar 2012 05:52
Very nice!

nazhinaz
Posted 09 Aug 2011 23:45
"I won’t let you steal my dreams" is the resolve that every heart broken should come with. Beautifull, poetic, romanyic yet full of the resolve to continue for a better future.

kinkygirl
Posted 29 Dec 2010 16:11
I really liked it

DirtyMartini
Posted 08 Aug 2010 13:21
A very positive attitude...and I wish you the best of luck in all that you do...

CuriousButterfly
Posted 04 Aug 2010 17:47
Thank you for the very supportive comments - very much appreciated

x3holly
Posted 04 Aug 2010 02:20
This is fantastic, in the writing sense. Horrible that you're going through it. Been there before, and it's definitely not something that's enjoyable. But, as in with everything, you have to earn the good stuff. Muddle through the crap, to find a true gem in life.
 

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