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If I could

The lovers lament...
If I could
Each and every day
The hours we were separated
Would be reversed

The investment at work, eight minutes
Daily occurrences at the gym, two minutes
The occasions of errands and eating and sleeping?
Mere seconds

If I could ordain
What my time is dedicated to
It would be an end around
A complete 180

The menial would be discarded
The mundane all but eliminated
The fluff and the worthless
Would be given no credence whatsoever

Things would look so much different
My life as it stands would be unrecognizable
The rat race would all but fade away
And what is truly significant would take center stage

And there you’d be
Covered in my attentiveness
Overwhelmed by the monotony of my presence
And probably begging for a way to escape

But hey, this is my dream
It’s very foundation is based on my desire
And that is where you come in
This goal, this lovely perfect dream...
Is you!

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Comments(13)

Ariel21
Posted 27 Jun 2012 22:36
You are an amazing writer!
SecretDesire
Posted 15 Apr 2012 10:58
Excellent and outstanding.... again well done. You never fail to excite me with your writing....5++

Buz
Posted 19 Mar 2012 18:04
BadMike you really did an awesome job writing this. I guarantee your esteem with the ladies rose sharply with this poem. Great job!

AngelHeart01
Posted 19 Mar 2012 05:11
If you see it, you can achieve it ♥
mickeyfinn1
Posted 18 Mar 2012 14:57
Beautifully put together Time to sort out priorities....Loved it!
MissyLuvsYa
Posted 18 Mar 2012 07:20
So beautifully written, just wonderful!!!!
writingvixen
Posted 17 Mar 2012 20:02
Beautiful.

TXGirl
Posted 17 Mar 2012 19:14
I love your take on what's really important...and I wholeheartedly agree. For the record, I can't imagine you ever becoming monotonous, and escape is not what I would beg you for.
LauraLee_sugah
Posted 17 Mar 2012 18:53
;-)
LittleSister_
Posted 17 Mar 2012 17:33
A look at what priorities should be. Well done

LatinSugar
Posted 17 Mar 2012 12:54
I am taken by your intense expression...Excellent!
sugarbabe
Posted 17 Mar 2012 12:39
A lovely perfect dream...
ArtMan
Posted 17 Mar 2012 11:23
Outstanding writing!
 

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