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I’m Not Yet Gone, But Forgotten.

The Forgotten Place We've All Felt
I find myself standing here not yet gone, but forgotten.

How did I get to this place and time?

I often wonder what I did.

I often wonder did I make you mad.

I wonder where it all went wrong.

My life that once was so colorful, so full of life and love is now cold and dead.

I'm not yet gone, but forgotten.

There isn't anyone here to save but I scream for help.

No one is coming; my world is just me now.

My life only exists of me.

I’m not yet gone, but forgotten.

I allowed my life to revolve around you.

Now you’re gone, you left.

You kept me safe.

You saved my life.

I gave you everything.

I’m not yet gone, but forgotten.

I remember the way we kissed.

I remember the way we made love.

I remember the way you helped me grow.

I remember the way you said forever.

I remember the words you promised me.

I'm not yet gone, but forgotten.

You lied though.

You’re gone, no more kisses.

You’re gone, no more love.

You’re gone, no more growth.

You’re gone, no more forever.

You’re gone, no more promises.

I’m not yet gone, but forgotten.

I stand here, in this empty world, alone and cold.

I scream, I yell, I look for answers that don’t come.

I tremble with fear, and worry, what’s to come?

I’m not yet gone, but forgotten.

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Comments(30)

xPoSxSubFreak
Posted 05 May 2013 11:12
I understand this piece, I felt it, I think we've all felt it once in our life time. So strong yet also vulnerable as a human. Great job.

MasterJonathan
Posted 10 Apr 2013 06:43
Damn Poppet...that was incredible.
Desires
Posted 16 Mar 2013 09:59
So beautiful

SugarBaby2013
Posted 05 Mar 2013 15:08
Beautiful, I love poetry.
Cinner
Posted 04 Mar 2013 13:25
So openly passionate and raw. Sharing your heart with your readers. Fabulous as always..loved it.
Banes1
Posted 22 Feb 2013 19:55
Poppet this was another well written piece. Though sad and emotional it had a profound effect on me.
BrownEyedBabyGirl89
Posted 20 Feb 2013 12:11
always a lovely and sweet poem
MdeSade64
Posted 19 Feb 2013 14:06
A wonderfully written poem but sad none the less.
swollen
Posted 19 Feb 2013 11:50
Love the way you repeatedly draw back to your title line. Cleverly written, well done. X
lensman
Posted 19 Feb 2013 10:34
So sad...so beautiful x
Navin
Posted 19 Feb 2013 10:05
So emotional. You are such a good writer.
Jethro
Posted 18 Feb 2013 18:13
Great job of letting it out and allowing us to feel it my friend. I know the feeling and I also know that putting that feeling into words is helpful. Thank you for sharing my friend.

Hotstuff
Posted 18 Feb 2013 17:15
A very dark piece written from the pain within..you nailed it in expressing yourself..sorry you are in so much pain, I wish you well.

blazestcyr
Posted 18 Feb 2013 08:01
no one could ever forget you !!your writing is just incredible!!!
nazhinaz
Posted 18 Feb 2013 03:51
Passionate poem. 5
HK4167
Posted 17 Feb 2013 22:07
Totally agree with ShyVixen, couldn't say it any better myself. Totally worth 5+++++
BatmanRises
Posted 17 Feb 2013 21:15
I really felt this Poppet, this feels so close to home. Well done xx
Peter_Pan
Posted 17 Feb 2013 20:31
Well you know how I feel about your work, but I don't always assume you are writing about yourself. You are a creative person. This, I hope, comes from your ingenuity and not from experience.

awake_
Posted 17 Feb 2013 20:30
touchy... I'm speechless
findingnichole
Posted 17 Feb 2013 19:58
This is dark but lovely... I know where you're coming from poppet. The pain of being forgotten is a strong one.
asleep
Posted 17 Feb 2013 19:17
Read what Miss JINXY said, and just know that she summed up my feelings about this perfectly. Good job with writing and thanks for sharing. "5"+++

Rick

Jinxy
Posted 17 Feb 2013 19:06
I'm with the others when I can feel the pain. The pain of being forgotten can suck you into a new world and you struggle to get out of it. You have to work so hard to pull yourself out.

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TxPrincess
Posted 17 Feb 2013 19:01
This is were your strength comes from, it is good, a great expression of what was and what you had.
LYFBUZ
Posted 17 Feb 2013 19:00
I'm a huge fan! Heartfelt loss was powerful...again that hammerblow of emotion: "forgotten"... Demonstrates a very impressive ability to change styles from some of your other work.
perkynipples
Posted 17 Feb 2013 18:50
very heart felt. I think we have all shared these feelings. this just sums those feelings up so well.

JamieW
Posted 17 Feb 2013 17:55
True words, making it a very heavy piece to read in the emotional sector. Very good though, Well done 5/5

ShyVixen
Posted 17 Feb 2013 17:39
Raw and heartfelt. A feeling many of us have shared. Beautiful writing.
hopperandwicked
Posted 17 Feb 2013 17:27
I gave the score of 5 because I licked it
psychiee
Posted 17 Feb 2013 17:26
Great to be the first to post a comment and give a score...hope you read this commnet Poppet loved this Avtaar picture Nice.. and sexy
psychiee
Posted 17 Feb 2013 17:22
very well done.. I dont understand the context. though I guess it is pining..wishing you well as usual.. hope you mend soon..but poetry is sure powerful... shame probably doesnt hit the person you hope to terget..?
 

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