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In Memorium

In memory of a lost love
In Memorium

Now what should I do with the sundered heart
That pounds pointlessly in my empty chest?
How do I instruct it to make a fresh start;
Plead for it to be not quite so obsessed?

And what should I do with these baleful eyes
That seek your features in every face?
How should I that adoring pair chastise?
How might I your cherished image efface?

Then what will remain when all is erased;
My sacred memories now nothingness?
With our past so permanently misplaced
To desolation do I acquiesce?

Yet past must become a forgotten shade
And some future light be my new crusade.

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Comments(12)

HK4167
Posted 03 Jun 2012 17:26
Nicely done with so beautiful words. Great job!
BaldurDreams
Posted 22 May 2012 00:36
beowulf69
Posted 21 May 2012 19:24
One critic?

I guess a person would give up Shakespeare in high school if their intellect couldn't keep up. That shows when they dare criticize something above their level of sophistication.

I think that this poem is awesome and I thoroughly enjoyed it.

Buz
Posted 21 May 2012 06:00
That is excellent writing CG.
PhilAnders
Posted 21 May 2012 03:04
Poetic passion, regardless what Softailgurl thinks of it.
playsit
Posted 20 May 2012 13:09
"Yet past must become a forgotten shade..." sometimes this is part of the evalution process. Love your form, meter and passion.
LauraLee_sugah
Posted 20 May 2012 11:24
"that heart that pounds pointlessly in my chest" oh my yes.....
ArtMan
Posted 20 May 2012 10:27
Most elegant. Wonderful writing.
Ianthomas
Posted 20 May 2012 09:56
short, sweet, perfectly formed and powerful - now get your armour off and go conquer!
nazhinaz
Posted 20 May 2012 08:13
What a love filled poem. Great & truelu poetic. 5
sisters
Posted 20 May 2012 08:10
Beautiful words
cocokisses
Posted 20 May 2012 06:40
Beautifully done, though a bit melancholy. Superior work as usual.
 

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