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Intensity At It's Finest

I'm losing my Lush Virginity. Be Kind..
You love it.
You're choking my heart within your hands,
I've trusted you. Don't abuse me.
Use me...
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Use me, I'm a toy.
I am yours for you are mine,
Who is in control?
Is it control, or a struggle for control?
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We crush together, intense,
Loving, loathing, rough.
Bruises and bites, I love it.
It's serious, this game...
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You're everywhere, all
Over me, sweating, speeding,
Building. I want you inside me,
Beside me.
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Feeling it building,
Everything building;
It's coming. I'm coming.
Thrusting, panting heart
Racing.
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Collapsing together, Ecstasy
Never tasted so sweet.
You're bitter sweet,
Loss of all control, yet
Totally empowered.
You've spent me thoroughly..
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I am Perfect.

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Comments(18)

EroticElegance
Posted 07 Dec 2012 09:28
Exquisite and beautifully written! Bravo!
naughtynicole
Posted 06 Dec 2011 16:34
very sensual
SYNCIERE
Posted 06 Dec 2011 15:51
loving the word play......very deep thoughts and intense feeling......keep it up
SYNCIERE
Posted 06 Dec 2011 15:51
loving the word play......very deep thoughts and intense feeling......keep it up
ArtMan
Posted 31 Oct 2011 06:17
so very excellent!

flytoomuch
Posted 12 Jun 2011 10:00
Fast paced....it rips you along like a strong tide....I like the last line "I am perfect".....wonderful!!
BaldurDreams
Posted 12 Jun 2011 06:46
thanks for sharing
spearone
Posted 11 Jun 2011 13:36
Intense and pulsating.. thanks!
Augmax
Posted 10 Jun 2011 15:32
Out standing you should write more !!!!!!

Buz
Posted 14 Apr 2011 12:06
Excellent & sensual!!!
CeliaisAliena
Posted 10 Apr 2011 10:57
I really like the speed and cohesion all the repeated words give the poem-- it makes it thrust forward with a kind of chiming effect, like a palpable beat inside, while also suggesting the rush of physical and emotional passion.
Piquet
Posted 10 Apr 2011 07:50
Wow, so intense ! You took my breath away. Well Done.
hornyryan
Posted 09 Apr 2011 20:36
i liked it u should write another one
carmen_has36
Posted 09 Apr 2011 20:28
well composed use of words like an artist's pallet! I appreciate and admire this!

Dancing_Doll
Posted 09 Apr 2011 06:47
You captured the intensity and vulnerability. Well done!
MissyLuvsYa
Posted 08 Apr 2011 20:09
I thought it was great!!! And I voted you a 5!!! You earned it girl!

stephanie
Posted 08 Apr 2011 19:06
Really good..... Always hard to write a poem that is both interesting and arousing... You nailed it!!!! xx SF
stang
Posted 08 Apr 2011 19:00
enjoyable
 

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