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For a dirty old guy who means a lot to me
Not asked for
Not looked for
But found none the less
Unique new joy

No gap in my life to fill
But now I know there will
Be a gap without you
I know you feel it too

Faith given
Trust given
Always understood
How far to go

Eyes open in the morning
Already I’m yearning
To greet the day and share
Whatever I find there

Heartbeats race
Thoughts race
So warm deep inside
Drunk on you sir

Emotion and thought awaken
Hearts long to be taken
My body aches for you
This fire inside is true

Touch me
Hold me
Though so far away
Your arms feel real

What fantasies we can see
Though it can never be
This thing is what it is
Let it crackle and fizz

Forget rules
Forget right
Go beyond labels
Break all the moulds

Connection unclassified
Instead we’re unified
Two and two together
Stronger for each other

Your Lady

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Comments(8)

Mistress_of_words
Posted 12 Oct 2011 17:28
Thanks for all the lovely comments guys and girls. I don't consider poetry to be a strong point of mine, but I was quite pleased with how this came out.

I really wanted to capture the feeling of falling for someone when you weren't expecting or looking to and realising that convention only has power over you if you allow it.
wifelover69
Posted 12 Oct 2011 05:48
I completely admire such fantastic writing Thanks
ibee
Posted 10 Oct 2011 09:44
Understood..great writings.

Buz
Posted 10 Oct 2011 05:54
This is eloquent! Excellent!
PhilAnders
Posted 10 Oct 2011 02:55
I'm a different "dirty old guy" who says this was a pleasure to read.
Mistress_of_words
Posted 10 Oct 2011 01:38
Thanks for all your comments. @Yahtzee, I'd love to know which bits you borrow
alonr
Posted 09 Oct 2011 14:06
You got it perfectly. Completeness with nothing missing... brilliant

crazydiamond
Posted 09 Oct 2011 12:57
"Drunk on you sir ", perfect! Beautifully explained! I Loved it.
 

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