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Tags: spark, hope
She walked the halls
Not a mouth spoke
Not a head turned
It had been like this, her whole life
Never being noticed
Then you came along
Paid attention
Gave her the love she never got
And for once in her life
She didn't feel invisible
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angeldust
Posted 05 May 2012 05:24
EXCELLENT
Gramps
Posted 05 Apr 2012 21:25
As Holly says, share a little attention and rewards are great.
nazhinaz
Posted 24 Mar 2012 09:54
Great thoughts, but how about changing Not a mouth spoke to not a tongue spoke? 5
HK4167
Posted 23 Mar 2012 11:01
Short but very sweet and lovely, and I can feel the happiness from your heart. Well done!
mickeyfinn1
Posted 22 Jan 2012 01:00
short and contented..liked it!
scarletblue
Posted 19 Mar 2011 16:38
hugs Ms H ... EXCELLENT!
tnblue
Posted 12 Mar 2011 09:09
I hope this is a true poem and you are content
easy_rider75
Posted 12 Mar 2011 07:32
You say so little at times but your few words have so much meaning very well done indeed nice job Holly keep them coming
scooter
Posted 12 Mar 2011 07:30
I like your work Holly, Being a slow reader, even I had time to finish this one! Every man and women should be so lucky to find somebody to pay attention to them. What a better world this would be

CuriousButterfly
Posted 12 Mar 2011 07:01
simple and sweet - yet so powerful and true - excellent work Holly xoxo
 

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