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It was Just My Imagination
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naughtynurse

It was Just My Imagination

I heard the door close today. 
A soft sigh of air pushed aside. 

You, home with me after all this time.

The water in my bath shimmered.
Droplets cascaded over out thrust breasts as I shifted, 
Longing to feel your touch along my flank. 

Did the floor creak? 

A pillow of rainbowed soap bubbles lathered, 
In swaths I scraped the surface clean. 

Why did I sense you here?
You’d never been to this place. 

I could hear your voice, its siren call I could not help but heed. 
Echoes floated in the steam, or was it fantasy? 
I saw you there in the room beyond. 

“Baby, come here,” I wished to say, 
But remorse grips my tongue yet today.
Inconsidered words in different days, 
Strewn about with careless ease, 
Taught the silence that crushes now. 

Peace gained at too great a price. 

You were here, I swear it so.
My exile redeemed, restitution for a debt now paid. 
Don’t leave me here like this

With just my imagination.

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Comments(21)

curious3045
Posted 11 Dec 2013 12:20
Great poem,,, it takes a strong person to write about something that seems so painful...

DLizze
Posted 08 Nov 2013 20:51
This really struck a nerve; for several years after my wife and I separated, I experienced similar imaginings.

Dancing_Doll
Posted 08 Nov 2013 04:49
Oh wow. I actually thought this was going to be just a light and sexy bathtub poem at first glance but you took it to a whole other level! I loved the way you captured the intense longing in this and the complexity of emotions. There are so many layers woven with just a few words. Really beautifully done!

Willyc2licu
Posted 07 Nov 2013 23:43
We have all known that feeling of longing and loss which you captured so well in just a few lines. Beautiful.

Liz
Posted 07 Nov 2013 14:24
Powerfully visual and descriptive. 5
Soleillalune
Posted 07 Nov 2013 12:30
Wonderful, imaginative and lovely
lemanruss
Posted 06 Nov 2013 10:47
Very nicely captures something I'm sure many of us have lived through. 5++

Buz
Posted 05 Nov 2013 16:54
A very touching and beautiful poem! Outstanding!
beowulf69
Posted 05 Nov 2013 08:04
excellent poem!

Mazza
Posted 05 Nov 2013 07:37
Lovely writing nn, easy to imagine, to be unsure...
Thank you for sharing xx
Delphi
Posted 05 Nov 2013 05:51
Beautiful, woman.

Milik_Redman
Posted 05 Nov 2013 02:16
That was such a visual experience. Filled with longing and sensuality. The verse flows beautifully as well. Wonderfully done.

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bill11
Posted 05 Nov 2013 01:07
I enjoyed reading the poem. It created a very real imaginary time and place, we all have dreamed and then been brought back to reality, this poem was living and documenting the feelings

Naughtygrl73
Posted 04 Nov 2013 22:03
Beautiful descriptions

Strangerlyd
Posted 04 Nov 2013 20:56
Lovely....

Saga
Posted 04 Nov 2013 20:52
Beautiful, my friend. This was a powerful and real and I love it.

Frank_Lee
Posted 04 Nov 2013 20:33
Like sprite said...the imagery really is so well rendered it brings the whole atmosphere of the poem to a very palpable level. And who couldn't recognize themselves in exactly the same place? Beautifully done...this is one to be thankful for.
LauraLee_sugah
Posted 04 Nov 2013 20:23
this made my heart hurt.

Ruthie
Posted 04 Nov 2013 20:14
Excellent. You evoke a sense of time and place with few words, and great emotion.
nazhinaz
Posted 04 Nov 2013 20:11
Imagination, visualization or even hallucination; whatever, but so powerful. 5
sprite
Posted 04 Nov 2013 20:11
wow. you really just took it to another level, NN. the imagery in this, the emotion, the longing, just so visceral. you packed so much punch into so few words. perfection.
 

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