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It's That Feeling

You are my gift
The stars must have been aligned
Do I believe in fate?
Maybe my karma was just right

I just feel so lucky 
Like I've drawn a royal flush
It's like when the line is cast
And you pull out the biggest fish

The feeling that you get when you sit down to eat
And you're served a scrumptious dish
The smile when you find a shiny penny
And you make the wildest wish

Can you feel it too?
The magic that is us

It's like walking in the fluffy clouds
My heart does leaps and bounds
Like dancing in the brightest stars
My treasure has been found

It's your favorite song 
Played and then on repeat
When your bones are very cold 
And someone snuggles you in heat

When you're feeling blue
And a special person makes you laugh
When you love somebody
And somebody loves you back

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Comments(16)

dragon_lilly
Posted 25 Mar 2014 16:51
This was just beautiful!

Aussie_kitty77
Posted 25 Nov 2013 02:20
This poem is so beautiful and romantic, I just love it
SouthernWolf
Posted 25 Nov 2013 01:59
Wow I was told to read ur stuff but I never knew it would describe me and my girlfriend the way it did. I can't believe it....it is just so beautiful the way ur words came together.
Peter54
Posted 03 Nov 2013 05:27
Especially for the 1st 4 lines. They sound so right
oursecret
Posted 31 Oct 2013 17:21
Every word you breath and speak is filled with love, passion and karma.
MidKnightMan
Posted 25 Oct 2013 10:53
Right from the heart... tender, honest, romantic and loving. Happy Friday and thanks for a good start to the weekend. Keep 'em cummin' ;-)

VanGogh
Posted 24 Oct 2013 15:23
what a great happy poem! well done!
jeremiahbull
Posted 23 Oct 2013 22:20
Can I feel it too? Absolutely!

Your Friend,
Frank N. Stein

Strangerlyd
Posted 23 Oct 2013 20:30
This is truely just beautiful, love it...
girlie4280
Posted 23 Oct 2013 15:47
Love it girl. Your poems are so great!

asleep
Posted 23 Oct 2013 14:44
Yes...a soft, sweet expression of "that feeling". I'm really impressed with your way of writing and thank you for sharing this with us. "5"+++

Rick

trinket
Posted 23 Oct 2013 13:50
Lovely Solei, "Walking in the fluffy clouds" conjures up ideas for all kinds of adventure!
sonnynola
Posted 23 Oct 2013 13:10
There is certainly a lucky guy out there! What the heck was his name?
Jsmooth721
Posted 23 Oct 2013 12:37
Beautiful to have such an amazing love and being able to express it so profoundly

Mysteria27
Posted 23 Oct 2013 12:23
Soleil - That was so heartfelt, romantic, poignant and just beautiful. You have such a way with words. I just love everything you write. You always paint such a beautiful story from start to finish. Lovely writing. 5
oursecret
Posted 23 Oct 2013 12:14
You are our gift..Thank you..
 

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