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Journey From I To Us

A journey to regain lost paradise......

Love melted away
from my life
making it completely barren
colorless
your presence
made me feel
heavenly
in paradise
you fill colors
in my life
your presence
is a rainbow
to me

Life was never pleasing
without you
your presence
making all the difference
giving life a meaning
soothing
purposive
smiley
creative
full of colors
my life without you
was so barren
single
lonely
yearning
for flowers
to blossom

You softly walked
into my life
as heavenly bliss
blossoming flowers
of rainbow colors
expressing love
filling my heart
with ultimate beauty
life without you
so meaningless
a dull routine
losing creativity

The heavenly flower
of your love
blessed me
with creativity
purpose and reason
to live love and care
all others besides self
making my existence
so purposive
life is now so full
worth living
when you're around
everything feels just wonderful
meaningful and friendly
barren deserts suddenly
appear full of flowers
life blossoming
productive
as if
lost paradise regained

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Comments(24)

AngelMelissa

Posted 18 Nov 2012 18:59

this is wonderful thank you for sharing

MissyLuvsYa

Posted 27 Oct 2012 08:15

It's gorgeous Nazzy!

Wildfire8470

Posted 22 Oct 2012 07:33

Beautiful. I felt the loss of life, the barren one you wrote. I hope she returns to you soon.

fukme4cum

Posted 19 Oct 2012 15:46

Wonderful! Loved all of it. 5

bat

Posted 19 Oct 2012 13:57

Very powerful ... Thanks for sharing well done

minx63

Posted 19 Oct 2012 02:49

Absolutely from the heart. Well written, thanks for sharing xx

Butterfly4629

Posted 16 Oct 2012 09:37

Beautiful!

hamz

Posted 15 Oct 2012 13:31

A 'special' person can make so much difference to your life.. really you have captured the transformation well!

avrgblkgrl

Posted 15 Oct 2012 08:05

Very sweet. I'm such a romantic at heart. It is so nice to be in that place, to have that one that makes all the difference. Your poem describes it wonderfully. It's refreshing to sit back and witness the realization of it with you. Thank you for sharing.

ShyVixen

Posted 15 Oct 2012 06:07

Touching and heart warming. A string of beautiful emotions shared with us. Thank you.

Bunny12

Posted 15 Oct 2012 05:56

Very sweet reminds me of rain giving life to the desert like her presence giving you life.

Wholelottarosie

Posted 15 Oct 2012 02:49

You know I don't do poems, but I definitely do words and your words are beautifully compelling.

Jayne33

Posted 15 Oct 2012 02:05

Capturing the feelings that Love creates inside us in words is so hard, as there arent words big enough to describe that feeling, yet with your poem you beautifully painted that picture. A really great poem Naz. 5+ x x x

perkynipples

Posted 14 Oct 2012 22:54

Beautiful

JessicaX

Posted 14 Oct 2012 22:11

I wish I was loved only half as much. I hope she knows how lucky she is.

luvbabysabrina

Posted 14 Oct 2012 21:38

Beautiful Naz. a 5 of course.

Blondie1940

Posted 14 Oct 2012 21:37

oh my goshh! that was so beautiful! i connected with it from the start! please keep writing

nazhinaz

Posted 14 Oct 2012 21:16

Feel so humbled and honored by all the beautiful encouring comments.
I somehow can't submit poems on lush with stanzas seperated. Would someone guide me please?