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Added: 08 Jul 2012

Kate

Tags: dominance, submission, goddess, sonnet, taming_of_the_shrew, siren

Kate

Harken, ears content, to mine siren song
As tender waves do lap about your soul.
Embrace temptation sweet; submit, belong
Submerged beneath my torrid seas; made whole.

Dutifully scurry about my feet
Seeking divine morsels to rend your heart,
Devour every beguiling treat
Abased beneath all I sternly impart.

Yet Petruchio is naught less his Kate;
Solar and lunar, unchanging, held fast.
Maiden Diana left to spinster state
Divorced of her devout, adoring caste.

So crawl, little kate, sacred toes to kiss;
Surrender yourself to submissive bliss.

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Comments(17)

beowulf69

Posted 16 Jul 2012 17:43

Super!

Issaquah

Posted 09 Jul 2012 14:22

Both direct and indirect at the same time - this is a very interesting poem. You do have a gift that gives on many levels. It is an artform.

CumGirl

Posted 09 Jul 2012 00:43

Thank you, overmykneenow. You are correct in observing "rent" should have been "rend".

The lower cased k of "kate" in line 13 is as it should be, as is the capitalised K of "Kate" in line 9 because they are different people ... and yes, this is D/s so that lower cased k has relevance.

Ianthomas

Posted 08 Jul 2012 23:48

Rent Party were an ace band; oh sorry, i digress. You know i could never be nice enough or give all the appreciation you really deserve. Where is that i am not worthy icon?

overmykneenow

Posted 08 Jul 2012 20:16

Disappointing.

I assume you're trying to use both meanings of the word of the word "rent" in line six? It doesn't work here, "rent" as in "torn" is the past tense of "rend".

Is the lower-case form of Kate in the last line intentional? I've seen an annoying trend on here to play fast and loose with capitalisation of pronouns in D/S writing ("Him" instead of "him") - is this another example or just a typo?

Am I being overly picky? Probably but you only have 14 lines to get right. Tighten it up and you might have something.

Buz

Posted 08 Jul 2012 19:24

Marvelous work. I loved it!

LauraLee_sugah

Posted 08 Jul 2012 16:46

very shakespearean... in all ways...

etairay

Posted 08 Jul 2012 16:36

wow thank you

love it ..special unique & very clever ..beautiful use of words ..lovely

CumGirl

Posted 08 Jul 2012 16:05

One day, Ian, if you are really nice to me, I will explain exactly how clever it all is so that you might show proper appreciation

Ianthomas

Posted 08 Jul 2012 15:20

For fear of unleashing a termagent (sorry, playing the game now of looking up obscure words! well, obscure to me!) I had better say this was rather good, and clever too, i would submit!