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knock knock

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a lover trying to connect with her lover
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knock knock

knock knock I tapped on your heart

I heard the sound, did not your heart

knock knock I tapped on your heart

I hate it when we are apart

knock knock I tapped on your heart

why do you not answer my lonely knock upon your heart

knock knock I tapped on your heart

it feels that you have locked out my heart

knock knock no more can my heart knock

please let your heart answer the knock of my heart

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HK4167
Posted 31 Mar 2012 23:45
Beautiful words. A very nicely done poem willed with true feelings. Thanks for sharing.

SecretDesire
Posted 31 Mar 2012 14:34
Excellent! Well done!

olderthandirt
Posted 21 Mar 2012 22:08
Very well done

spearone
Posted 08 Mar 2012 11:28
Very... evocative... with form and rhyme! beautiful work a real poem!

LatinSugar
Posted 02 Mar 2012 19:09
Very expressive..now breathe..and feel better.

gooneyc47
Posted 29 Feb 2012 11:24
Very unusual for me to like poems but you did a very nice job of showing your sensitivity.

jed
Posted 27 Feb 2012 19:11
again... very good

mickeyfinn1
Posted 26 Feb 2012 23:40
heartfelt..nicely thought out

perkynipples
Posted 26 Feb 2012 23:02
Nicely done
 

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