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Let Me See

I need it all, baby.

I need to see your face.
It would make all the difference
to be able to
touch your mouth
see your smile
know you see me.

I need to see your hands.
It would make all the difference
to be able to
hold your hand
kiss your palm
feel you touch my face.

I need to see your tummy.
It would make all the difference
to be able to
kiss it slowly
nibble lightly at your waist
move my mouth still lower.

I need to see your feet.
It would make all the difference
to be able to
kiss them gently
kneel before them
offer myself to you.

I need to see your cock.
It would make all the difference
to be able to
taste your broad head
breathe over the wetness
take it in my mouth.

I need it all, baby.
Let me see.

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Posted 12 Apr 2012 10:47
Sugah, you so smoothly capture the thoughts that we all feel. Your final words of "I need it all, baby... Let me see!" capture the angst felt from the deprivations caused by remote relationships...

Yet you continue to make us suffer with only a peek of your sweet nipple.
Posted 08 Apr 2012 03:23
wow, very sensual and passionate. an absolute 5.

Posted 17 Mar 2012 21:23
wonderful!! seeing is believing!!
Posted 17 Mar 2012 11:54
So sensual with so much love. Such a sweet and lovely piece with beautiful words. Nice job.

Posted 16 Mar 2012 04:04
Ms. Sugah, let me see...I loved it!!!
Posted 15 Mar 2012 20:21
I loved this one
Posted 15 Mar 2012 16:56
You're quite a talent, love. You stir the senses with your writing....and makes me look forward to the next installment. TY....
Posted 15 Mar 2012 14:23
i am enthralled, exalted n enraptured... as the poem progresses it "envelops" you and gives you a sense of longing...makes you covet....makes you want and hope that tis i the coveted one your pen bleeds its ink for..the one you wish to see...lovely

Posted 15 Mar 2012 12:49
I wanted it to go on and on! Loved it!
Posted 15 Mar 2012 12:24
wow you did it again what a very exotic poem very very passionate, keep up the great writting love it
Posted 15 Mar 2012 08:22
So direct, so knowing what you want, so passionate and lustful. The poem builds and the words take you to the inevitable. The guy you want to see is so lucky.

Posted 15 Mar 2012 06:26
LauraLee, your writing just keeps getting better and better.
Posted 15 Mar 2012 06:13
that's great.

Posted 15 Mar 2012 04:59
Whoa! Nicely written LauraLee!

Posted 15 Mar 2012 04:54
Well done!
Posted 14 Mar 2012 22:03
An erotic poem this time. 5

Posted 14 Mar 2012 21:53
Hot and sensuous and deeply passionate, all clothed in sincerity and also very believable. Another 5.

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