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Lonely Heart

Tags: want, ache, sad, wonder
My lonely heart lay heavy

Upon the breast of my existence

As the sickle moon rests softly

In an orange Harvest sky.

The black top of my life

Roams like a coiling snake

Searching, seeking

Across the barren

Landscape of my mind

Where is my lonely heart?

Adrift and forgotten

Under a darkened star,

Or hidden away in the depths of

Long ago?

Lost to what is new and real

Crushed like an aluminium can

Discarded

Kicked into the gutter,

Left, and destined

For some lonely ladies, rickety cart.

Where is my hurting soul?

Fragile and small

Made to feel

Less than worthy

Doomed from the time of creation

To be tormented

And wrong?

Why do I fear?

Why must I long for what I cannot have

And ache with sorrow

At the loss of what never was

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Veronika
Posted 18 Sep 2012 19:44
OMG its so emotional.... so lonely.... described beautifully.... 5/5

Piquet
Posted 23 Jul 2012 05:16
A fine sense of melancholy and an excellent description of profound lonliness. Well Done.

SecretDesire
Posted 21 Jul 2012 14:07
Very touching and moving.... Thanks for sharing.

Frank_Lee
Posted 20 Jul 2012 06:24
Once again, LS, written with the power very few possess.

HK4167
Posted 17 Jul 2012 20:42
Such sadness described in so beautiful words. Another wonderful piece from you. Totally worth a 5.

LatinSugar
Posted 17 Jul 2012 18:11
Such a sad thought..my heart goes out to you..grand expression...

etairay
Posted 17 Jul 2012 16:20
wow thank you love it ..pain sorrow wonderin seekin ..the heart will always want what the heart wants ..never easy

Buz
Posted 16 Jul 2012 05:07
Very strong, well written.

playsit
Posted 16 Jul 2012 03:36
Your powerful emotions reached into my chest and made me ache with you... the mark of a great poem

PhilAnders
Posted 16 Jul 2012 03:10
Very touching.

John_Doe
Posted 16 Jul 2012 00:55
Beautiful, sad and romantic poem all together. Words expressed can be felt by so many lives who read it.

nazhinaz
Posted 15 Jul 2012 23:16
"Why must I long for what I cannot have" what a powerful communication. 5

LauraLee_sugah
Posted 15 Jul 2012 23:06
littlesister_ you absolutely make me weep with you.... with concern for you and the fact that i feel these same things....
 

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