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Losing you too soon
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scarlet

Losing you too soon

Feeling the pain and loss of someone you love when they are gone.
I look around at the world, and wonder where you went,

I look around at the world, and see the places you were meant to be,

I look around this house and see you and me in every corner,

I look around this house to see your face somewhere, but nowhere,

I look around at the world and see the empty spaces that you where meant to fill,

I look to the doctors to tell me why you went,

I look to the doctors to see who was at fault,

I look inside myself to find the answer,

I look down at myself and see the space inside me that you will never again complete.

I look to up into the sky and ask why you ever went.

I look into my arms where you will never again sleep,

And I stop looking completely.

I stop because nothing will ever bring you back to me, and the future without you is what I have to continue looking for.

This is mostly for me, but I wanted/needed to share, so I welcome anything that anyone has to say about it. But also I'd like to add a special thanks to Vesta and Dantheman69 for calming me and helping me believe in myself and the future.

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scarlet
Posted 19 Jun 2013 22:59
PhilAnders
Posted 02 Aug 2012 03:08
A lovely, poetic, and tender story in prose form which I thoroughly enjoyed reading, Rac. Thanks for sharing it.

Saga
Posted 24 Jul 2012 10:31
Tack for att du skrev detta och delade med dig! Stora Kramar!

sexygeek
Posted 20 Jul 2012 13:17
Thanks for sharing.. Beautiful...
midnightraider61
Posted 03 Jul 2012 17:39
I have spoken with several moms suffering from the loss of a child, but none of them were able to express it as vividly as you did. For a few, the heartache was too debilitating; for others, they had to move past it to survive. You were able to express it and then move on. Bless you.
HK4167
Posted 03 Jul 2012 00:04
Such a beautiful poem filled with your true emotions. Pain, sorrow, heartbroken. Thank you for sharing it with us, and all the best wishes for you.

DLizze
Posted 01 Jul 2012 07:18
Thank you.
LauraLee_sugah
Posted 01 Jul 2012 06:36
lovely and sad... oh my....

Red_Dragon
Posted 21 Jun 2012 18:37
Great Poetry lil ghost truly feel it in the heart
manofdesire
Posted 21 Jun 2012 13:12
very deep and emotional. thank you for sharing.
John_Doe
Posted 21 Jun 2012 07:56
Beautifully written, and a search for answers that you may never find truly while suffering in pain and loss, and breaking that chain in order to move on in life without them which is the hardest part of it all.
dantheman69
Posted 21 Jun 2012 06:43
Well done. I'm glad that you posted it. And obvously so are a lot of other people. Slaps your bottom but don't think your getting off easy.
SpeedyC
Posted 20 Jun 2012 23:16
Very well written. You can feel the pain in the writing
nazhinaz
Posted 20 Jun 2012 22:35
I can feel your grief and pain. Emotionally highest level of communication. 5
bat
Posted 20 Jun 2012 20:14
So beautiful..I can't even imagine your pain. Thank you for sharing. your friends are here for you Big HUG
Michael
Posted 20 Jun 2012 19:43
Beautiful words of the heart, yet mere words can never express nor release the pain. In times of loss I remember the words of Tennyson...

"'Tis better to have loved and lost
Than never to have loved at all."
velvety
Posted 20 Jun 2012 19:24
my heart goes out to you...i can relate to this... the soul wrenching pain, the emptiness...but life goes on...we have to move on. I admire your strength and the courage of opening up and sharing your grief through this beautiful poem.
Makavelli
Posted 20 Jun 2012 18:56
I liked the emotion, the flow, and tone of your poem. I felt every word of it. Thanks for sharing this, Racking!

ShyVixen
Posted 20 Jun 2012 17:50
A beautiful tribute to the one you loved, and for the new journey you embark on. I marvel in your strength, and thank you for sharing your heart so openly.
etairay
Posted 20 Jun 2012 17:22
thank you for openin ur heart ..for sharin ..for being strong ..for the beautiful woman that u r hold onto that love ..it will give u peace

jerseylynn
Posted 20 Jun 2012 17:18
hugs you tight and kisses your head..thank you for posting this and sharing it with us.
beinggood
Posted 20 Jun 2012 17:02
my heart so goes out to you..ty for sharing..
sunshinehigh
Posted 20 Jun 2012 17:00
be calm knowing in the fact that you are on the path that you are meant to be and that you will have something wonderful to teach the new babies..they will learn to treasure everything more because of you. You are a great person and i love you

FeistyWolf1970
Posted 20 Jun 2012 16:58
So heartfelt and emotional, an outpouring of your soul as you have searched for answers and questioned why. I applaud you for having the strength to share your loss with us in this beautiful poem.
vesta
Posted 20 Jun 2012 16:52
Your empty arms will be filled one day soon, but your heart will always have a special space that will be filled with love for those lost to you too soon hun. Be strong hun XXX
redlips
Posted 20 Jun 2012 16:38
Emotional, beautifully sad, yet with the mention of the strength needed to go on, that is "...continue looking for" Yes, continue, continue, continue, and accept your friends support. HUGS!!
 

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