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Love Deployed

Permission to love you from afar - granted or no?

I can’t walk away from this

I can’t sever the binding ties

I feel the filaments of our emotions

Stretch across the world

Time

Space

Don’t mean a thing

As they extend

Intertwine

I fear for that moment

When they will become taut

To point of recoil

What will happen then?

Will my heart snap in two as well?

Even while waddling in the unknown

Even filled with uncertainty

I can’t walk away from this

I can’t sever the binding ties

I am begging you

Tell me what to do

A friend of mine, a Canadian reservist who recently deployed overseas had the misfortune of falling madly in love before shipping off. In his last email I sensed him to be conflicted and pained - his words inspired this poem.

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Comments(6)

HK4167
Posted 26 Jan 2013 20:42
Well done. Such a wonderful poem. Totally agree with Jayne33, many could be related with this.

Mazza
Posted 26 Jan 2013 09:36
Very well done and I agree that most will be able to relate to this one x

sweet_as_candy
Posted 26 Jan 2013 09:22
Such a beautifully written poem, so much emotion captured in such a short piece of writing Loved it.
allinabout18times
Posted 25 Jan 2013 09:51
You express things so well...

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nazhinaz
Posted 24 Jan 2013 22:23
I endorse Jayne33. Thousands using internet could relate with this beautiful poetry. 5

Jayne33
Posted 24 Jan 2013 16:32
I think a lot of people will be able to relate in some way to this beautiful piece of writing. 5++ x x x
 

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