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Love Loss Regret…

The grass is not always greener on the other side...
You & me can never be…

We promised to love and care for each other forever

when you told me you loved me it came straight from your heart

yet, without a warning you said goodbye

was it something I did?

was it something I said?

I was left searching for answers

these questions haunted me all through the years

It became part of me

I was never free...

My tears

my pain

my sadness

my broken heart,

all consumed me… left me confused

…and oh how I grieved...

I searched the crowd everyday in hope we might meet again

years after, I met you at that familiar place

you look sad, I saw the distant look on your face

I greeted you… not knowing who I was

I had to remind you.

You were startled

you smiled and took my hand

you said "sorry, I made a mistake,

can I find it in my heart to forgive you."

You said “it was not you… it was me”.

you begged me to give you one more chance

I reminded you

I gave you

my love,

my heart,

my body,

my mind…

all came with a lifetime guarantee…

now my heart will bear a scare...

I believed all your loving lies…

Now, no more...

In my heart you will never be

my love you will never have

my touch you will never feel

my kisses you will never taste

So now… go long…

I’m living love,

breathing life…

my pain...

my sadness...

my tears...

no longer consumed me...

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Comments(18)

curious3045
Posted 26 Mar 2014 08:40
A wonderful poem, even though it caused great pain. Your choice of words made it sound heartfelt and with some healing mixed in. Great job
velvety
Posted 12 Jul 2012 01:30
Great piece...intense emotions well expressed.

sxaddited60
Posted 20 Jun 2012 12:34
well written, exposing raw emotion, one can only go forward.
ibee
Posted 09 Feb 2012 08:08
I did reread that guarantee. You missed sec.7.3a. great emotions. TY
kaotik1
Posted 31 Jan 2012 19:27
i like how you went from before all heart broken to turning the tables on the other person later.. and i would do the same thing.. once the heart has been broken no point in letting someone back in.. forget that mess
writingvixen
Posted 30 Jan 2012 08:07
beautiful and i can feel every word. no longer love loss regret, now only love fullness peace.
underthehood
Posted 24 Jan 2012 04:59
A very emotionally charged poem indeed. Great job !! A well deserved 5.

Buz
Posted 23 Jan 2012 04:32
Very emotional and heartfelt. Great work!
Mobius_NR
Posted 23 Jan 2012 03:46
Such pain!
mickeyfinn1
Posted 22 Jan 2012 22:48
beautifully constructed ....full of emotion and pain
John-doe
Posted 22 Jan 2012 22:24
excellent, and leaving us with so many questions on why and if...to me thast is what poetry is about, making the reader feel something and asking questions...
nazhinaz
Posted 22 Jan 2012 21:29
Beautiful poetic effort. The emotions are pure though depicted rather unwittingly. 5
tnblue
Posted 22 Jan 2012 19:28
fantastic
PhilAnders
Posted 22 Jan 2012 14:25
Excellent........from the heart.........BUT

You and me can never be if you and I don't even try.
HK4167
Posted 22 Jan 2012 12:43
I can feel the pain among the lines. Will it be too cruel not give the person another chance? I don't know. There use to be love but now it's gone. The heart has been broken, shattered and not everyone is strong enough to touch that deep wound again.
Navin
Posted 22 Jan 2012 12:08
Raw. Poignant. Well written.
ruggedblokeuk
Posted 22 Jan 2012 11:39
That is a fantastic expression of life, we have all loved and lost, been hurt and got by, but to face the hurt and tell it, it no longer controls you, wow and I know you are a warm and tender loving person, mind body and soul. Always be you, daddy is a big fan of YOU xxx
bronze
Posted 22 Jan 2012 11:12
Hey SD! you tell him... I disagree with the comment below... Love is never loss however, pain is not not something you want a person to go through. When someone caused you pain it's very difficult to forgive. I for one would not open my heart again for it to be broken a second time.... well written!
 

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