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My first poem published in this site. I hope you readers like it! Free to comment.
Do you remember the time we first met?

The whispering wind calmed our longing threat

Our eyes glued. The coldness made us shiver

The night gave in, smelled the sexy perfume of tender

You were perfect, those blue iris and luscious lips

I felt warmness arising inside. More when your hand dripped

Over my shoulders, down to my palms, then you reached my hips

You took me at once, fell into your arms and clipped

Close enough to taste each other

One move, it will change the dawdling procedure

You touched my mouth. I opened to blow a heat

Twice. Our kiss met, without deceit

Gone. Fast. The moment created a steamy practice

We bit our teases

We crushed all voices

And opened the erotic verses

Longer it went. The rigid surface weakened my soul

I was dreaded. Fear swallowed my whole

You held me, told me this is not a foul

True, it was you and me, eagerly scowled

It was the wanted feast

We savoured all affection’s guilt

Our flavour was wonderful. We were beast

Indifferently passionate, perfect without any release

Heart’s knocked out. Mind’s drove wild

Bodies ached. Mouths swelled

No sole had us hindered, as we’re impelled

It flowed. Immersed by the fluid of one’s wiled

We reached the massive climax

I squirmed, engorged on the attacks

Cries of our ambience washed your thrusts

It was a desire. A desire of lusts

This is the blistering memoir of you

The glimpse of our heavenly statue

Seized every tick of the clock where we dove

Our first time, the first time we made love.

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Posted 06 Apr 2014 06:54
Great use of words in unusual positions. I liked the change in tempo. Heartfelt and passionate. Keep writing.
Posted 30 Mar 2014 01:04
You're so romantic
Posted 11 Mar 2014 08:55
Hope this the first of many. Nice imagery and passion.

Posted 23 Feb 2014 18:32
Great poem. I enjoyed reading this. The first time is always special, at least it should be. That first kiss, first date, first time making love should all be held in high esteem. Thank you for your lovely poem
Posted 06 Feb 2014 18:18
This is lovely. Keep writing!

Posted 28 Dec 2013 10:09
I am new here and reading lots of stories. You are good and should write more
Posted 30 Nov 2013 07:19
Lovely poem. I hope you write some more.
Posted 23 Nov 2013 06:36
I love it...I think it reflects a lot of people's first times....

Posted 08 Sep 2013 17:13
Your words bring a warmth to my heart as memory's of similar love flood back to my mind. Thank you for sharing your talent sweet lady !!

Posted 01 Jul 2013 07:06
Its work (poems) like this that help me remember / recall what young lust and love was like so many, many years ago. Oh to be able to relive those days if only I could. Thank you so much for the memory trip. "5"+++

Posted 28 Jun 2013 03:45
Without deceit indeed. Nicely done.
Posted 22 Jun 2013 19:52
Great prose very sexy
Posted 19 Jun 2013 04:13
Wow! Eliza, till date I was unaware of d poetess in u. U r really a good poetess; with tender feelings and right words 2 express the.

Posted 13 May 2013 01:10
Very nice words and lovely form. Good job.
Posted 05 May 2013 23:17
Poem is beautiful. Poetic form adhered. 5
Posted 05 May 2013 21:55
A great memory!

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