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Mercy
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LauraLee_sugah

Mercy

Tags: sex, surprise
there are no words


The surprise is
I was not surprised
when you stepped
into my path.

Visions of hot, striving bodies
flashed through my mind.
Your mouth owning open and willing lips.
Your fingers twined with mine.
Your erect length
pinning me to crisp white sheets.
My entire being enthralled,
captured,
at the mercy of your body
Every moment perfect.
Every breath shared between us.
Every inch of my body used
by your hard and wicked need.

Your eyes,
the color of the deepest forest,
barely met mine as you passed.
That part was a surprise.

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Comments(23)


ShyVixen
Posted 17 Nov 2013 17:36
Splendid! You always reach your readers. Well done.
HK4167
Posted 09 Nov 2013 21:08
Such a sensual beautiful poem...totally worth a 5.
ArtMan
Posted 08 Nov 2013 06:04
Beautiful and erotic. 5+
beowulf69
Posted 05 Nov 2013 07:42
beautiful sexy poem! 5+
MexicanGoddess
Posted 03 Nov 2013 20:51
Amazing!

Buz
Posted 01 Nov 2013 19:11
LauraLee I was hoping you were writing this about me! Then I got to the forest colored eyes...damn

Lucky guy, whoever inspired this tasty morsel you wrote. You are totally outstanding Lauralee!
Coco
Posted 28 Oct 2013 04:27
You do amazing things with words.

SydneySider
Posted 27 Oct 2013 03:05
ahhmmm..yeah..wow..
Soleillalune
Posted 19 Oct 2013 16:42
It felt so spontaneous .. As if the moment had just happened before I read it
Sisyphus
Posted 18 Oct 2013 13:08
powerful and evocative...beautiful and sad....you have the rare talent to say so much in so few words.

Strangerlyd
Posted 18 Oct 2013 09:15
Beautiful....
Alphamagus
Posted 18 Oct 2013 08:05
Another amazing addition to your collection. Beautiful!! xxx
Mobius_NR
Posted 18 Oct 2013 05:33
Yyyyyup! Dat's a 5!

delsmith
Posted 18 Oct 2013 04:27
Beautiful as always.

Saga
Posted 18 Oct 2013 03:07
It's always a pleasure reading your poetry. This was beautiful.

Milik_Redman
Posted 18 Oct 2013 01:22
I just love reading your poetry LauraLee
LittleSister_
Posted 18 Oct 2013 00:27
I suffer these surprises every time I walk down the street
Wonderful, evocative and intense my friend, yet another testament to your amazing talent and skill as a poet xxxx

alexmarch
Posted 17 Oct 2013 22:02
There are no words...yet you seem to find them. Bravo once more. Your talent is as rare as the beauty of your soul.

DLizze
Posted 17 Oct 2013 21:40
It's true - it is always a surprise when a vision is (apparently) not shared by the object of our sudden desire. If only we were telepathic.
nazhinaz
Posted 17 Oct 2013 21:22
Beautiful. Wish someone could ask for such mercy. 5

asleep
Posted 17 Oct 2013 20:48
Have MERCY...that was a fine poem. And have MERCY ... it sure was hot! The title just fits as it comes from a real southern gal..."MERCY" Thanks for sharing this. "Lord have MERCY" you sure can turn the heat on!

Rick
Barrone
Posted 17 Oct 2013 20:41
Wow, I love your poem
Jsmooth721
Posted 17 Oct 2013 20:11
An amazing expression of lovemaking
 

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