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Moonlight Swim

A late night swim
Just you and me
Silently slicing through the lake
Smooth strokes in unison
Moving together in perfect rhythm

Moonlight shimmers the surface
The cool night air refreshes after a long, hot day
Only the sound of crickets chirping
And the splashes of our arms and legs
To break the stillness

Our clothes in a heap on the bank
We are so free.
So comfortable.
So calm.
Always swimming together

If I tire, you tread water
You wait for me like I wait for you
When we get in too deep,
And our toes don't touch,
Fear sets in for just a moment.

But I am there for you and you are there for me.
As it will always be.

As we approach the shore to dry and dress
We stop shoulder deep for one last wet embrace.
We kiss deeply and passionately.
Our bodies pressed together
Nipples stiff from the cold water, cool air,
And the anticipation of what comes next.

At this moment, there is nowhere else I would rather be.

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Comments(19)


Poppet
Posted 06 Nov 2012 20:10
Please never stop doing what you do!

♥Pop

sweet_as_candy
Posted 13 Oct 2012 11:07
Goodness your writing skill is amazing. It exudes romance and sensuality. I absolutely love this! You create amazing images with your words, a true talent x
SecretDesire
Posted 01 Jul 2012 11:06
Excellent writing as always.... Well done.

beinggood
Posted 20 Jun 2012 17:06
you write so well..ty for sharing..it is a 5
sexymlee520
Posted 18 Jun 2012 12:55
that is soo beautiful, another great poem hun!!!
Immortilous
Posted 17 Jun 2012 13:44
Just simply beautiful...
manofdesire
Posted 15 Jun 2012 23:21
really good poem and very well writen

DLizze
Posted 15 Jun 2012 15:46
Makes me long for midnight swims.
CumGirl
Posted 15 Jun 2012 10:13
Very romantic ... I can visualise it perfectly x
Kitten86
Posted 14 Jun 2012 22:23
i love this!
sweeter
Posted 14 Jun 2012 22:21
The perfect poem
naughtyone
Posted 14 Jun 2012 21:01
Wonderful metaphor of the dynamics between you and your lover. A joy to read. Why is "5" the highest score possible? I would rate it well into double digits.
LauraLee_sugah
Posted 14 Jun 2012 20:14
beautiful and romantic and loving.... i love it...
justinebaby
Posted 14 Jun 2012 19:44
you are a great poet
etairay
Posted 14 Jun 2012 19:38
wow thank you love it ..sweet innocent beautiful ..felt it ..niice

LatinSugar
Posted 14 Jun 2012 19:13
Lovely, the way you carry her is wonderful...Bravo!!!
whisper2269
Posted 14 Jun 2012 18:23
that was so sweet
justaddkatie
Posted 14 Jun 2012 17:38
I felt like I was swimming in that lake with you. So very well done.

Hotstuff
Posted 14 Jun 2012 16:52
I love the way you write with such sensitivity and emotion..
 

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