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My Heart Weeps

My Heart Weeps

Trying to forget someone you love is like trying to remember someone you never met. Unknown

it's heart-wrenching to love someone
you adore

who takes for granted the love
in my eyes
the lust
on my lips
the desire
in my heart

it's heart-wrenching to love someone
from afar

life is full
of adoration
missing its mark
giving some a lesson,
needed or not,
that love is foolish
and unattainable

it's heart-wrenching to know their heart
does not return my love

holding my weeping heart
together between palms
soaked with tears,
feeling the loss
slide between my fingers,
praying my heart is mendable

it's heart-wrenching to try to walk away

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Posted 20 Dec 2013 18:58
So sad, yet beautifully written. 5+
Posted 18 Dec 2013 03:45
Heart Weeps is very heart felt. It really connects. Pain is a motivator for writing. Such is translated here. Very well done!
Posted 14 Dec 2013 23:00
I can completely equate and feel your pain
Posted 13 Dec 2013 15:51
Achingly sad, wonderfully written.
Posted 11 Dec 2013 19:31
Especially touching. I can really feel this.
Posted 11 Dec 2013 18:02
Sad, sweet, beautiful, painful. Out of words.
Posted 11 Dec 2013 04:48
I love the way you made this poem so harsh while using only gentle words. Sometimes the absence and loss of affection can be much more painful than any other affliction. Nicely done!

Posted 10 Dec 2013 20:11
Ouch! You cut it right to the quick!

Posted 10 Dec 2013 17:49
You have truly captured heartache. The words and expression are beautifully constructed. Outstanding poem!

Posted 10 Dec 2013 14:20
Oh PA!!

I really felt this as I read it...

It was touching, sore and heartfelt...

Splendid job, really nicely expressed... (hope it fades soon)

Posted 10 Dec 2013 10:45
How beautifully you've captured heart-ache, I love this so much!! Cx

Posted 10 Dec 2013 08:52
A well written commentary (sad) that is so real in real life as well as in fantasy/virtual computer life. Thank you for this. "5"+++


Posted 10 Dec 2013 08:11
Very sad, love hurts, Lovely writing...

Posted 10 Dec 2013 08:03

Posted 10 Dec 2013 07:48
oh dear hurts to trust to expressed all that and more in this lovely poem and I thank you....wonderful

Posted 10 Dec 2013 07:40
This is such a sad poem. But it is very lovely and beautiful too. I know it is sad, when it doesn't work out but you just have to know that it was meant to be for a reason. You will find the one with much searching, but when you do it will be well worth it. This is a lovely piece. 5

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