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My Left Hand
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My Left Hand

Tags: marriage, love, heart, life,

For all the times it felt like a brand,
Laying there across my hand.
Shouting don’t ask, don’t try,
This woman is not free to buy.
Not that this was always planned,
But it still lays there on my left hand.
Stopping me from running by,
And losing my tough guy.

For this reason I abide,
But refuse to become a Stepford bride.
Standing at the altar like a frump,
Hiding my almighty bump.
Keeping up with your stride
And watching as our family cries.
Smiling as our throat grows lumps,
Both looking down to our bump.

The life we made has been up and down
But still we tried not to frown.
The joys have come with our baby’s birth
However some we leave to rest in the earth.
We get through this not letting us drown
Mostly through acting like perfect clowns.
From there we start our marriages rebirth
Making sure we know it’s true worth.

For all the times it felt like a brand,
It now lays happily across my hand.
I say don’t ask, don’t try,
This woman does not want to buy.
For us this was not planned,
But will stay there forever on my left hand.
Stopping me from running by,
And leaving my heart with my tough guy.

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Comments(21)


Milik_The_Red
Posted 15 Sep 2012 04:49
Beautifully written and heartfelt. A truly memorable piece.
Brendanbravo
Posted 05 Aug 2012 01:17
Imagine a lot of ladies relate to this.
StillUndecided
Posted 20 Jul 2012 16:46
Beautiful
SecretDesire
Posted 19 Jul 2012 22:53
Wonderful and very sweet.... thanks for sharing!
FeistyWolf1970
Posted 19 Jul 2012 17:38
A very emotional and moving poem. well done, an excellent read!!!
GabrielSweet
Posted 19 Jul 2012 17:04
I have always seen the wedding ring as a vanilla collar, this is very good and says allot in it's few words, thank you

Saga
Posted 19 Jul 2012 17:01
Oh honey, this just made me cry! this was beautiful! Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem! Hugs and kisses!
LauraLee_sugah
Posted 19 Jul 2012 16:46
real life sweetness... loved it...
etairay
Posted 19 Jul 2012 16:02
wow thank you love it ..honest raw real & encouragin ..beautiful
T_Elle
Posted 19 Jul 2012 14:53
I so loved this... I have a tough guy, too.
HK4167
Posted 19 Jul 2012 14:06
Sweet and lovely, what a beautiful poem about marriage and bonding. Totally worth a 5.
kaikai012
Posted 19 Jul 2012 12:29
beautifu!! i feel the love

midnightraider61
Posted 19 Jul 2012 12:12
I didn't realize what "it" was until I read the story through. My heart goes out to you and to him. I hope you are together for all time in your hearts and souls. You are a wonderful writer.
gossamer
Posted 19 Jul 2012 12:11
Sometimes poetry is all that gets us through life's most intense moments. Hang in.
Navin
Posted 19 Jul 2012 12:02
Wonderful. Good job.
Weretiger
Posted 19 Jul 2012 11:42
very sweet
Makavelli
Posted 19 Jul 2012 10:35
Emotional and heartfelt!
nazhinaz
Posted 19 Jul 2012 10:26
A lovely experiment in form sweetie. I did enjoy your emotions conveyed but your new poetic form is so very attractive for me. 5
Kiki
Posted 19 Jul 2012 10:14
Very sweet indeed, beautiful & heartfelt!

Michael
Posted 19 Jul 2012 10:06
So sweetly said... Thank you for sharing.
Lovely title as well.
cocokisses
Posted 19 Jul 2012 10:06
Quite touching.
 

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