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My Love

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Last night you held me, 
 Oh so very close!
 Our arms were straight above our heads - fingers entwined.

Our legs were stretched out together - toes touching.

 Our bodies were as one – skin to skin, heartbeat to heartbeat, and oh, so deep inside!

You looked into my eyes and saw my soul!

We kissed with a hunger and passion unknown before.

We became one!!!!

 And yet, we haven’t met.

Yet!

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helencath
Posted 19 May 2013 23:15
Just found this - l love it - so true!

DaddyCares
Posted 18 Mar 2013 11:36
So true for many here

CenterLine
Posted 17 Mar 2013 12:50
Nice free form/blank verse. Well constructed.

Dementorkissed
Posted 05 Jan 2013 13:48
short and sweet

delsmith
Posted 31 Dec 2012 09:36
That is written beautifully from the heart

naughtypilot
Posted 22 Dec 2012 00:59
I crave for that hunger too

screwloose
Posted 24 Nov 2012 16:05
very powerful words...captivating... did not take too much imagination to think it had actually happened...the last sentence... "and yet we have,nt met " snaps you straight back into reality... very good writting on your behalf... keep them coming... you are truely a poet to follow... well done and thanks for the post

Discreet4953
Posted 11 Aug 2012 20:13
It didn't rhyme ....lol

GabrielSweet
Posted 08 Aug 2012 21:45
I liked it alot, I didn;t know this was going to pop up, I just said what I felt, but I am reading on to the next now

GabrielSweet
Posted 08 Aug 2012 21:44
lovely poem, and I love the imagery at rhe end, it is a very eye opening and up-to-date concept ty

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Navin
Posted 22 Jul 2012 07:58
Well done. Love the ending.

PhilAnders
Posted 30 Jun 2012 02:06
Nicely erotic.

asleep
Posted 11 Jun 2012 19:05
That blends so well with "where" i'm at in my head/heart. "5"

Rick

Hotstuff
Posted 23 May 2012 08:37
Beautifully written..loved it. 5

fuzzy1954
Posted 20 May 2012 18:40
Great Poem very talented

jacobport
Posted 17 Apr 2012 10:41
Short and sweet....loved it!

playsit
Posted 17 Apr 2012 10:20
Fantasies and dreams can be so powerful. Short and simple, but I could feel the passion.

kywcat
Posted 15 Apr 2012 00:10
mmmm love visualization of a hot loving meeting of two who yet haven't meet but can feel their hunger and passion for eachother.

willford5
Posted 11 Apr 2012 05:51
I like that, very nice Cat

Helen49
Posted 11 Apr 2012 03:12
but they are!! xx

Roberto48
Posted 11 Apr 2012 03:05
Oh, Helen... so wish they were us!

SecretDesire
Posted 10 Apr 2012 02:36
Wonderful poem... Sweet and Romantic... Well done. Loved it!

Hammer49
Posted 10 Apr 2012 02:29
Very good!

mickeyfinn1
Posted 10 Apr 2012 01:15
Dreaming..gets the imagination working!

nazhinaz
Posted 09 Apr 2012 22:43
"And yet we haven't met". What powerful concluding communication. 5

LauraLee_sugah
Posted 09 Apr 2012 21:26
ahhh the power of a dream....
 

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