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Mystifying Rhythm

A Sensual Tempo
Lips reaching, seeking, finding truly touching
Fingers entwined, legs wrapped tight pulling closer
Breasts firm full of want, of need to have those
Hands trace his name, his scent, his desire

Stamping his print deeply on her skin
Finding that special spot that makes her scream
Running the length of her smooth untainted canvas
With hot lust pouring from the sound
Of his voice as she lies under his blazing fire

Big strong fierce protector of her heart
Shielding her from the tempting fear with a smile
Wet, hot, moist juices flow, she sees visions of the burning
Tail of a celestial comet slicing through the darkest sky

Wild untamed innocence found waiting on the edge of sexual exploration
Back arched, eyes half open to passion and hunger
Hips pressed tight motionless yet moving, swaying, grinding

The moment is here, now, moans muffled by complete ecstasy
With one more thrust deep, hard, soul wrenching throaty growl
He empties into her with a mystifying rhythm
Unity to the pulsing of their hearts
His Love

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Comments(21)

asleep
Posted 08 Jan 2013 09:48
Four months later...and I'm re-reading this. It STILL is so very stirring, so very visceral in the last verse, "...with one more thrust deep...he empties into her...". Oh, how I can just close my eyes and feel what you have written. WOW!!

Rick
dirtyoldguy
Posted 03 Dec 2012 05:24
Wow! Wonderfully sensual poem. Liked it a lot, x
Piquet
Posted 13 Oct 2012 10:51
Once again - fantastic !
bill11
Posted 23 Sep 2012 14:39
As always, so erotic
asleep
Posted 09 Sep 2012 11:19
To say that is HOT hardly does it justice. THAT will melt down the hardest of the "HARD". "5"'s all the way!!
kaikai012
Posted 06 Sep 2012 12:57
Very Nice !
Dancewithme
Posted 05 Sep 2012 14:24
Querida! Wow, this is pure Latin Azucar!
This poem captivated me like an Argentinian Tango!
Weretiger
Posted 03 Sep 2012 11:44
What should I say... Wonderful poem sugar
tazznjazz
Posted 22 Aug 2012 11:29
This I !!!

Milik_The_Red
Posted 20 Aug 2012 14:53
Perhaps the most exquisitely erotic poem I've read yet. Wonderful tempo. What a beautiful vision of bliss.
Irishdrifter
Posted 20 Aug 2012 07:25
LS. Once again you have given us a sensual romantic poem. Every word just brings you in deeper. Just full of the passion that you bring so well to your poems. Sorry I could only give it a five. I must say. Bravo!! LS.

SydneySider
Posted 20 Aug 2012 02:40
soft and sensual start, finished with a bang...pardon the pun..love it
LauraLee_sugah
Posted 20 Aug 2012 02:01
sensual as always....

Frank_Lee
Posted 19 Aug 2012 12:16
This is...inspiring...to say the least. A beautifully deep experience beautifully rendered.

sweet_as_candy
Posted 19 Aug 2012 11:07
Stunningly beautiful writing. Perfectly descriptive and emotional. Oozed passion. I loved it! Red hot 5 xo
Alphamagus
Posted 19 Aug 2012 10:19
Another wonderful piece. You have a very rare talent! Brilliant!
sisters
Posted 19 Aug 2012 10:14
Excellent Isa. If only all love making was this good!!
Makavelli
Posted 19 Aug 2012 09:46
I love the passion, the tone, and the flow of this poem. As a reader, I feel like I’m in the poem! Thanks for sharing another great piece!
spearone
Posted 19 Aug 2012 09:13
Wow! So evocative... literally and figuratively!
HK4167
Posted 19 Aug 2012 08:44
So much passion and love, so romantic and sweet. 'Unity to the pulsing of their hearts. His Love.' Bravo!
Kal-El85
Posted 19 Aug 2012 08:37
Awesome poem as always, Isa.
I love the last stanza..great climax to the entire thing.
 

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