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Never Enough Breath

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Sleepy body and brain float

somewhere in that twilight world

where my heart is free

and love is simple.

I pursue you

through the deep water,

darting in and out

like a mermaid

as you watch me warily

and hide in the murky depths.

My lungs suddenly empty

and I struggle to surface.

You take my mouth

and become breath for me,

filling me with yourself.

Holding me

until I am calm

then you disappear

leaving me part you

and part hunger.

There is just

never

enough

breath.

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SecretDesire
Posted 13 Apr 2012 14:04
Wow... I'm speechless.... Excellent writing!...5+++

Buz
Posted 09 Apr 2012 14:38
Really very nice!

ibee
Posted 09 Apr 2012 09:38
Yess.. you're Breath Taking & you don't know it.

ArtAngel
Posted 09 Apr 2012 09:07
Sensational...as always..you capture every moment with such passion .5++++..star* poem again

capemay4u
Posted 07 Apr 2012 05:42
I loved your poem and you are very talented and I will be reading more of your works...please keep writing..it hits home for me!

HK4167
Posted 06 Apr 2012 21:40
Beautiful and breathtaking, as always.

PUSSYSPECIALIST
Posted 06 Apr 2012 21:18
great poem

PhilAnders
Posted 06 Apr 2012 15:11
Very nice, but I didn't disappear. Look behind you, My Dear. :-)

Warlock
Posted 06 Apr 2012 14:53
Never enough.. words to live by.. good images Sugah..

LittleSister_
Posted 06 Apr 2012 12:21
No there really never seems to be enough breath! Oh and I know that feeling well, to be 'part you, part hunger'... To crave him like a sustaining breath! Lovely Miss Laura, simply lovely! 5

Sisyphus
Posted 06 Apr 2012 10:52
so lovely, so magical. The slender graceful lines move and tell a love story in a few words. I like" part you part hunger" a sense of wanting more..yes, there is never enough breath.

alexmarch
Posted 06 Apr 2012 08:59
Literally breathtaking. Beautiful and moving. A "5" doesn't do it justice.

PersonalAssistant
Posted 06 Apr 2012 08:05
breathtaking

DLizze
Posted 06 Apr 2012 07:25
" ...in that twilight world ..." ah yes, good description. And someday, you WILL be able to breathe freely again, safe and secure in the knowledge that there will always be enough breath.

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nazhinaz
Posted 06 Apr 2012 07:00
Wow: what thought provoking poem. Can't get out of it beauty and glory painted by the poem. 5+++++++++++

Bunny_Chow
Posted 06 Apr 2012 06:39
Very nice.

angeldust
Posted 06 Apr 2012 06:34
Breathtaking,you are such a talented writer

ArtMan
Posted 06 Apr 2012 06:13
Quite lovely.
 

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