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On Losing a Lover

I was not expecting my first submission to be this...my reaction to a recent experience.


We moved our fantasies to reality,

Fulfilled our wildest dreams.

Loved, laughed and loved again.

A time filled with joy and delight.

It was always just sex we said,

We lived a life less ordinary.

But too soon the phone call came,

You decided to once again

Become the man you were.

I said all the right things

But choked on the word goodbye.

The tears flowed silently down my cheeks.

Then I realised...

I was not sad because I was losing a lover.

I was sad because I was losing a friend.

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lucy65
Posted 09 May 2013 07:04
Beautiful and sad.. I think you should add a tag for friendship.

Elling50
Posted 20 Mar 2013 22:47
Beautiful

asleep
Posted 27 Dec 2012 04:20
That hit very close...very close indeed! Thank you for sharing. "5" +++

Rick

CurlyGirly
Posted 24 Dec 2012 05:13
Bittersweet indeed. Well done.

Qman
Posted 16 Dec 2012 21:12
sad words, wonderfully crafted!

sweet_as_candy
Posted 10 Dec 2012 06:42
Oh sweetie, I could feel every word of this! You can tell you poured so much in emotion in this as you wrote it. Sending you cyber hugs xx

EroticElegance
Posted 06 Dec 2012 20:34
Beautifully expressed. Thank you for having the courage to write how you feel.

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hornydad72
Posted 06 Dec 2012 00:06
Very Nice Poem, but sorry you had to write it in the circumstances

Mystic_Angel_77
Posted 05 Dec 2012 15:45
very well written, but so sad

Jethro
Posted 05 Dec 2012 09:57
Very nice. Very well put. The realization that he had become much more than your lover was a very good ending

screwloose
Posted 05 Dec 2012 05:52
altho a lover you have lost... a friend will stay in your heart... times change ... people move on... the memories last forever... well written plush.

sexybbw71
Posted 05 Dec 2012 05:32
Very nicely done but so sad...I'm sorry!

Piquet
Posted 05 Dec 2012 03:59
A bittersweet little piece beautifully expressed.

SydneySider
Posted 05 Dec 2012 02:22
Heartfelt P...nicely done..
 

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