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Tags: love, stars, heaven
Sometimes you curl my toes the feel of your tongue rough
leaving me in throes of giggles as it wiggles its way deeper into my cunt just as you worm your way
now there is an apt metaphor, or it would be if you were a gentleman, or even a man, your
cock at attention, demanding mine
into the heart of me, my velvety sex pouting and pulling
pulsing and purring
as I explore your anus
and yes I went there
care to make another dare, my dear?

Now where was I...?

Perhaps lost in thoughts of you
or perhaps your bible black and starless ice cream eyes
mine filled with glitter and glass and the crashing of the waves on the beach knowing that it’s the touch of your words and the caress of your love that pulls me into you and makes me moan with greed
the only time I am not afraid to drown
even when you don’t lay a single finger upon me

Did I tell you of my dream? Not of cream, nor of cookies but tsunamis
hurli-pools and whirli-canes
and bathtub drains, leaving rust-red stains
oh, yes, that thought is never far away even during the light of day
and yet, tonight, it is eclipsed by the rise and fall of your chest as you drift
spinning until my gravity is gone and yours pulls me into your orbit

Meteors burn across my sky like trails of your nails down my back
as you connect the dots and guess the constellations of the heart
and yes, the shape of rockets is ironically iconic
conic as well which reminds me, I promised you ice cream and...

so many things...

I drifted off again
you should be used to it by now
me searching for a way to say
thatI'd be lost without your lifeline, floating though endless void
Instead of coiled like spools of gold filament around your nervous solar system
and yes, I am as shocked as you are to find myself part of your spine
as we lay for hours like wordless whores howling at the moon
fuel finally spent
perfectly content
todrape ourselves in silvered slivers of silence and share a lust of a different kind
whispering poetry in the dark
my hands as birdlike as my spirit
my body curled into the nest of your arms
falling into the star strewn heavens at the speed of light
my tongue tripping over the only truth that matters
at you
shush me
with a kiss
and suddenly it is all so clear
how the universe began.

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Posted 30 Aug 2012 12:10
I love it

Posted 01 Apr 2012 10:01
A supernova of unbridled passion.... beautifully written!

Posted 20 Mar 2012 04:30
Wow! Rachel! This is some damn great writing! Super creative! Excellent!
Posted 19 Mar 2012 11:38
It's like a mashup of Walt Whitman and Francesca Lia Block, with a 70s prog-rock template shifting time-signatures (wait, is that a real thing?) and imagistic sideswipes through "Psycho", Wallace Stevens, and maybe a Bjork video. Full of wild flourishes crescendoing, then sinking into si-si-silence, a bohemian rhapsody

Posted 19 Mar 2012 08:36
As heartfelt as it is fun and clever. Who wouldn't want to be the object of your creative affection?
Posted 19 Mar 2012 06:01
Stunning use of metaphors and emotionally charged !! Loved it xx
Posted 18 Mar 2012 21:45
Stirring and heartfelt. Very well done.
Posted 18 Mar 2012 15:09
I read it my imagination working..different and I liked it
Posted 17 Mar 2012 20:58
A fine creative piece Sprite!
Posted 17 Mar 2012 19:48
that's great!
Posted 17 Mar 2012 17:00
emotions stirred and share

Posted 17 Mar 2012 08:32
Posted 17 Mar 2012 06:54
just wow

Posted 17 Mar 2012 05:53
very good reading!
Posted 17 Mar 2012 05:36
Good poetic attempt.
Posted 17 Mar 2012 05:33
Hot, intelligent, interesting words. well done !!

Posted 17 Mar 2012 05:24
What a love poem. The way your mind works is interesting Rachel. I love the reference to "lifeline" .... Beautiful!
Posted 17 Mar 2012 05:24
Your word play is great. Had me smiling thoughout the piece. Excellent!!!

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