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Pagan Rite

life is what it is......


You think you have hidden

your faint smile of satisfaction

as I come to you....

stand in the spot you have indicated.

But I see it.

I understand it.

I will do what I must.

My body glows pale and pink

in the faint light of this room...

this chamber of the High King.

You tell me to dance

and the sensuous skin

of my beckoning body

begins to move like a river

of music and brushstrokes.

The colors are perfect

and feminine

and powerful.

They paint a goddess,

THE Goddess.

My fingers caress you

everywhere that the High King commands....

your collarbone,

your back just above your waist,

your buttock at that spot where it joins your legs.

I spin away and perform my fecund dance with joy and temptation

knowing that you see

the wetness of the curls between my legs...

the few faint diamond drops decorating my inner thighs.

The music moves faster

as I dance my fingers over my soft, round body

showing you what worship the Goddess

requires,

deserves.

Your manhood is erect

and majestic....

How else would the High King display himself?

I take you in my holy mouth

licking,

sucking,

laving you with my sweetness

until I bring your body to such orgasm

that your lordly posture is no more.

I rise slowly,

put my hand on your face,

know in that moment

that the High King will never even speak my name.

The Goddess arises within.

I turn,

gather light around me like a cloak,

and vanish

leaving the High King in total darkness.

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Comments(22)


WileyWill
Posted 30 Sep 2012 15:01
Beautiful imagery, Sugah. It really paints an incredible, sinuous, sensuous image in motion. I just read it; next time I'll have to listen.
asleep
Posted 16 Sep 2012 14:06
WOW is so inadequate...I'm really enjoying your work and talent. "5" all the way!!
TantricDrummer
Posted 26 Aug 2012 09:38
I do not know how to read poetry, and am completely inept at writing it.
I just know that I could feel and sense the relationship and the energy of the dance, the dancer and the observer.

That's really what's important at the end of the day.
You know I'm a big fan, and think its great you've thrown yourself into poetry. Look forward to many more.
Dancewithme
Posted 13 Aug 2012 15:56
Great poetry, so beautifully constructed, with such soul gripping images that one sees things now as never before. "Wetness" is now "faint diamond drops," and so on. But the key is when the Goddess arises from the excessive pride of the King who will not even utter her name. That is when she places her hand on his face, and takes over the light of what is. Leaving him powerless in oblivion. It reads like a great poem of Hesiod in his Theogony--which really says "genos"= a-temporal emergence of "Theos" "the gods." This reads then as cosmogonic myth. Glorious work Sugah!! I bow to you on this one!

Buz
Posted 11 Aug 2012 21:36
Whoa! All that pagan sexiness and your hot sexy voice too! Great sexy poem! 5+
kay_s
Posted 10 Aug 2012 20:09
amazing and beautifully written

beinggood
Posted 08 Aug 2012 00:17
so passionate..how kind of you to share this..a super 5

Shylass
Posted 06 Aug 2012 18:21
Gosh, you've got a sexy voice! You just added a multitude of layers to something already deeper than a thousands universes.

Michael
Posted 06 Aug 2012 10:40
Beautiful and tantalizing sad, yet strangely fulfilling... 5+++

billybroadband
Posted 06 Aug 2012 06:57
wow. beautifully written..great images

Shylass
Posted 06 Aug 2012 06:51
Oddly, I actually felt like I was intruding on David and Bathsheba, setting aside their God and becoming all-powerful deities themselves. A fine, rich work of jewels and god-sprung passion, my lady.

SydneySider
Posted 06 Aug 2012 04:47
my goodness...you never cease to amaze me, amaze us, with your words, your gift...parts of that sucked the air from my lungs..wow..

LatinSugar
Posted 06 Aug 2012 03:18
Lovely Ms.Sugah. Your dance is just simply amazing...

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GingerKitty
Posted 06 Aug 2012 00:33
whoa! amazing
nazhinaz
Posted 05 Aug 2012 21:35
what a great idolization. My salutaions to you Sugah. Your imagination is completely bewildering. 5+++++++++++++++ wish i could somehow communicate as effectively as you have.
ArtMan
Posted 05 Aug 2012 19:44
Sinfully wonderful!
Mobius_NR
Posted 05 Aug 2012 19:13
Girl you're still hitting home runs!
Sisyphus
Posted 05 Aug 2012 19:08
Such a powerful poem about power and feminine energy. The sensual energy and the flow and rhythm is evocative and dramatic. I was gripped by the vivid imagery and the ending where she takes the light and leaves..very well done...i was moved by the power of this poem.
PUSSYSPECIALIST
Posted 05 Aug 2012 15:25
great poem
playsit
Posted 05 Aug 2012 15:03
Wow Sugah... just WOW!
HK4167
Posted 05 Aug 2012 14:47
What a beautiful poem filled with so much passion! Great job!
Weretiger
Posted 05 Aug 2012 14:33
wonderful poem
 

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