Perfect Womanhood

A Poem about first time lovers 18 and 20 years

I love you as I see you
Naked, supine on my bed
The beauty of your tender face
Your golden hair outspread
Upon the counterpain.

I drink in your lovely body
My dream of perfect womanhood
Your swelling breasts so round
And firm, soft pink areolae
Like roses to be kissed.

There beneath a mound of
Finest golden curls
Your vulva yawning wide
Moist in expectation
Inviting me to come inside.

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Piquet

Posted 24 Jul 2012 00:27

A very economical use of fine words and a loving, gently erotic mood. Well Done.

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Posted 02 Mar 2011 14:32

Hey Regello, I didn't know u wrote poetry! Then again, u do like a lot of great authors. Anyways, great poem: the length of each line, because it's short, adds to the sense of flow and creates wonderful rhythm. The tumbling lines create a great effect and the imagery is simple but all the more vivid. Great job especially with the line, "Moist in expectation." It's very emotional and erotic. Keep going bud. I'd like to read some more.

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