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Perfection

the way you feel inside me is perfection


I watch your beloved and intense face

and touch the edge of your mouth

as you slowly slide your erect length

into my longing.

Breath ceases

as a moan is pressed from my throat.

All is perfect.

,

Of course, the earlier kisses,

desperate and wild,

were perfect.

The laughing chase as we

ran to the bed leaving a trail of clothes behind us

was perfect, too.

.

But this moment is

perfectly serious,

perfectly sensual,

perfectly enthralling.

Your cock hard and dripping.

My pussy pulsing around you,

sucking you,

inviting you into every part of me.

Suddenly you pause

in that exquisite unknown

of stars above and stars below

and kiss my smiling mouth.

Your body passionately claims mine

as you thrust into my heart.

Harder

and faster

I meet you

in joy

in exaltation

in burning heat

until we shatter

and collapse

in perfection.

.

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Comments(26)

Peter_Pan
Posted 14 Nov 2012 11:20
A perfect description of what I love about making love.
HK4167
Posted 26 Oct 2012 17:09
beautiful and erotic...

Saga
Posted 22 Oct 2012 04:35
Love it!
Piquet
Posted 20 Oct 2012 14:04
Beautiful LauraLee, captures the moment just, well...perfectly.
ArtAngel
Posted 19 Oct 2012 08:37
Outstanding...!!! You touch the core of our hearts with such excellence in the way you write sis..Bravo..!! mods..? Yellow ribbon here pleaseeee..!! gosh
bill11
Posted 17 Oct 2012 19:46
I sure enjoyed reading the poem. Such a real life event, know its happened

DLizze
Posted 14 Oct 2012 10:13
" ... the laughing chase ..." Once again, she describes beautifully the balance of laughter, lust, and yes, love (though many of us fear saying it) that makes good sex perfect. Well done, Lady.
BIC
Posted 14 Oct 2012 05:29
Perfectly in and fit
For a poetic Princess
Whose soft soul wit
Our hearts doth possess.

Buz
Posted 12 Oct 2012 18:21
Beautiful writing!

LatinSugar
Posted 12 Oct 2012 11:24
Intense emotion as always...

ShyVixen
Posted 12 Oct 2012 11:17
"Your body passionately claims mine as you thrust into my heart" perfect in every sense of the word! Loved this!
playsit
Posted 12 Oct 2012 09:29
I always get a grin on my face when I see a new poem from you Sugah... they're always worth reading. Loved how you added some fun to this. Being with your lover should always be fun. Dare I say "perfect"?

Hotstuff
Posted 12 Oct 2012 06:31
To quote you, "oh my." That was beautiful, sexy, erotic and so very loving...Thank you for sharing your beautiful words with us all.
oneway
Posted 12 Oct 2012 06:27
beautifully done
PhilAnders
Posted 12 Oct 2012 04:12
Shoo-gahhhhh, reading this was the best way to start my day if I can't start it perfectly with you in my arms.
Sisyphus
Posted 12 Oct 2012 01:15
So perfectly expessed, shown, evoked. The laughing chase, the playful passion, the smiles, the touching, the shattering, the joyful collapsing into the perfect culmination that began earlier with a perfect kiss...a perfectly lovely, happy poem.

Mazza
Posted 12 Oct 2012 01:04
You're so good at expressing desire, passion and lust, Sugah...
This is no exception!
I loved it! Xxx
Milik_The_Red
Posted 12 Oct 2012 00:02
Astonishingly well writen. The descriptive nature of this poem is the defination of Eros. Beautifully done.

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frogprince
Posted 11 Oct 2012 23:33
Wow. Very beautiful description of sex. We start off excited and builld up to total climax. The love is there but also the feelings. Every word was chosen carefully to fully express the passion and emotion. Lovely words from a lovely caring Southern Belle. I am proud to call you friend. Love to you.
nazhinaz
Posted 11 Oct 2012 23:10
Wow: Begining with perfection and concluding with perfection. Absolute perfec Poem. So erotic. Sugah, you always the best in erotic poetry. 5

SydneySider
Posted 11 Oct 2012 21:59
Goodness...get me a cold towel...perfection indeed
Weretiger
Posted 11 Oct 2012 21:20
fine... 5+

billybroadband
Posted 11 Oct 2012 20:31
a wonderful poem, perfectly expressed
spearone
Posted 11 Oct 2012 20:24
Nice!
TransitionalMan
Posted 11 Oct 2012 20:19
Well titled, and wow!

GingerKitty
Posted 11 Oct 2012 20:04
Damn! Very sexy, indeed
 

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