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Please Tell Me That You Can Stay

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I watch you lie so quiet and still,
You really are a lovely sight,
So many dreams you helped fulfill,
As I recall our previous night.

As the morning sun begins to rise,
I watch you lie silent on the bed,
A soft glow dances upon your eyes,
The pillow softly cradles your head.

The morning sun bathes you in light,
As you slowly start to awake,
My thoughts soon turn to delight,
As I think of the love we can make.

Though we loved the night before,
I wished it would never end,
At the sight of you I yearn for more,
To make love to you again.

Your smile drives my imagination wild,
Please tell me that you can stay,
Your touch releases my inner child,
My inner child wants to play.

It's in these quiet times we spend,
That it's you I'm thinking of,
Times I wish would never end,
I will never tire of your love.

05-03-10.
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Saga
Posted 26 Apr 2013 21:19
Lovely.

DonAbdul
Posted 13 Jul 2010 14:06
Damn! Alan that was so heartfelt; I wish I'd written those very words myself. My hat's off for you mate!

savanna
Posted 05 May 2010 04:15
Oh how I wish just wish and dream I can have that one day. Hey men im here waiting for that magic to happen to me. this was a great poem. And waiting for my time

She
Posted 04 May 2010 10:17
This is a beautyfull poem Mr.Exakta. You expressed your emotions very clearly so we can feel affection, desire and some urge forwards this woman. This is my first read of your work and based on this poem I will enjoy myself reading..

Milik_The_Red
Posted 04 May 2010 00:40
Very nicely done.

AngelHeart01
Posted 03 May 2010 18:15
Wow, what woman wouldn't love to get this?!

Kayte7
Posted 03 May 2010 16:14
Love suits you, Alan. As evidence by this sweet romantic piece. I can imagine you sitting on the bed next to her gazing at her and sighing, as your wrote this. Nice!!

BigRod
Posted 03 May 2010 15:10
Every now and then I'll read something and say "Wish I'd written that".. good stuff Alan.. when the mind and heart work together like that it's always your best stuff.. well worth the wait..

Piquet
Posted 03 May 2010 14:25
Sweet and beautiful work Alan. Well Done !
 

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