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Quench My Thirst

A lovers plea for her cum
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Quench My Thirst

Copyright © Don Abdul 2010

Quench My Thirst

Let me tease you, and save the best for last

Part your thighs

Open them wide, tonight there'll be no lies

Faked orgasms, flung far into the sea

I'll eat your wet, throbbing sex 'tll you scream your every plea

From trough to crest as you ride the wave

As you're tossed, and flung towards the orgasm you so much crave

Go on honey, touch the face of heaven

Soar as you ascend from one to seven

Just you save the best for last

As you gush from your twitching erupting twat

Twist, thrashing and cumming hard and fast

With the lotion of your release, pray quench my thirst

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DonAbdul
Posted 06 Sep 2010 12:07
@cuddlebunnie73: Thanks for the thumbs up hon.

jena121
Posted 27 Jul 2010 22:51
I dont care what word you used Don - it was still a great poem - just wish it was me you wanted to do that too - anytime babe

nivek_88
Posted 22 Jul 2010 13:57
i cant get mine to flow like that, great job man, im on the lookout now

suckmefuckme
Posted 21 Jul 2010 01:04
It was good,but i must agree with the other comments,, I read it and left the whole line with twat out,and changed twist, to twisting,and it seemed a better option to me.. What are your thoughts.? Keep up the good work.

scooter
Posted 20 Jul 2010 15:19
Nice work Don. The only thing I see different is; you keep getting better dude!

LePush
Posted 20 Jul 2010 14:40
Good Poem- Twat didn't work for me either. However, I think if you rework it a bit and don't try to make it rhyme it has all the elements of a great poem.

SweetPenny
Posted 20 Jul 2010 14:32
Like I told you, I don't usually read the poems here. But it was very good.

Conflicted_Feelings
Posted 20 Jul 2010 10:17
Pretty Decent, I cudn't have written that lol

susanna
Posted 20 Jul 2010 09:52
Loved it. Please contact me direct on: susanna30@btinternet.com Thanks, Susanna

Fargo
Posted 20 Jul 2010 09:39
Scored with a 2 because: Using the word twat sort of ruined the mood:(

savanna
Posted 20 Jul 2010 09:02
Great poem yes but I agree with lealisa that word dont work for me also. but the rest was good.

Buddybear
Posted 20 Jul 2010 08:56
Well done. I normally prefer rhymed poetry, but your imagery here was well crafted and intense. Yes, lose the word twat. and add 2 or 3 lines at the end describing the taste, the feel of the pussy milk on your tongue. then be satiated. I gave a 4

tats80
Posted 20 Jul 2010 08:51
very well thought out liked how it made me feel while reading it =)

lea1lisa2
Posted 20 Jul 2010 08:46
Change the word twat, doesn't go with the erotic sensual rest! x
 

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