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Quietly, I Exit

A Rondelet Poem
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Satisfaction...
our darkness illuminated
...satisfaction...
I smile, inhale and sit jaded.
The light bounces off of your skin,
beasts released from deep within.
Satisfaction!

I needed that.
My smoke dances through the still air.
I needed that.
The love made nothing to laugh at -
my mind thinking back, recalling...
The times when I’ve let go are rare,
I needed that.

A long sigh slips..
gazing at your nude body spent.
A long sigh slips,
legs quivering from toes to hips...
Unadulterated event -
I will need some time to repent!
...a long sigh slips...

Shhh slowly dress -
as not to wake you from your sleep.
Shhh slowly dress...
Its too comfortable on your chest.
Garter, hose, skirt... all in a heap.
I’ll leave my panties for you to keep,
shhh slowly dress!

Last night was yours,
Tomorrow then, must be all mine.
Last night was yours.
Daylight will break in an hour,
Leave my number? The bottom line ...
I just don’t know if I will have time.
Last night was yours....

Ours

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Iszofia
Posted 07 Apr 2012 05:17
Your works teaches me a lot about the different type of poetry techniques. I had to look up what a rondelet poem is and knowing the style and structure makes me understand this poem a lot more. I love the imagery conveyed and the use of repetition in this poem. Brilliant!

SITTING
Posted 31 Mar 2012 06:16
'Stargazing' hit the nail on the head!

I love this poem! So much depth yet not pretentious in the slightest!

stargazing
Posted 30 Jan 2012 05:29
"Love is passion and fire; it haunts and enchants the one who touches it."

Some say love makes you weak from vulnerability, I say love makes you strong from surviving the fires of passion

John-doe
Posted 19 Dec 2011 03:49
ok, now you are just showing off....well done and vivid. Beautiful

Buz
Posted 13 Dec 2011 15:52
This is very nice! Great writing.

Buddybear
Posted 12 Dec 2011 15:47
amazing construction of images, memories and metaphors. magnificent

Frank_Lee
Posted 02 Dec 2011 06:31
It's like that. Just like that. Beautifully told.

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ddubya
Posted 30 Nov 2011 07:02
that was really excellent - you can't stop now

beinggood
Posted 30 Nov 2011 00:06
absolutely loved this..ty..wow.what an exit..its a 5

SecretDesire
Posted 12 Nov 2011 13:23
Brilliant writing.... thoroughly enjoyed it especially this line "I will need some time to repent". 5+

ibee
Posted 12 Nov 2011 09:20
great one.ty,very much..

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nazhinaz
Posted 11 Nov 2011 21:18
"Last night was your, .... Ours" Beautiful reluctance to come over from your to Ours. Enjoyed thoroughly. 5

kinkygirl
Posted 11 Nov 2011 19:11
been waiting forever for this, thank you, loved it and bye

magnificent1rascal
Posted 11 Nov 2011 18:49
Excellent! A lovely exit it was...
 

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