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the one
who held me captive
has been dead for some time,
though he had time enough
to teach the prisoner
that she was there to serve.
when he made his exit
he left the cage locked
and over time
others came to give advice
or give reasons why the cage was necessary.

but then
you came by
carrying your magic mirror
telling me to look closely
and notice
that the door was actually open,
the captive truly free
and worthy
and beautiful.

the rescue would be enough reason
for me to adore you.
because rescue me, you did.......
from my captor,
from myself
but
as I watch,
and listen,
and worship,
I understand
that I am here
to

rescue

you

back.

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Comments(16)

ibee
Posted 09 Apr 2012 09:26
rescue away Belle.
capemay4u
Posted 08 Apr 2012 03:19
How lovely and moving..
HK4167
Posted 06 Apr 2012 21:35
Amazing piece, beautiful and meaningful. Great job.
SecretDesire
Posted 06 Apr 2012 03:21
WOW Amazing... Fabulously written. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Well done! 5+++
angeldust
Posted 03 Apr 2012 17:07
Wow another masterpiece,truely worthy of a second reading
LittleSister_
Posted 03 Apr 2012 09:53
I am left speechless and wishing for that rescue as well! Superb Miss Laura! Simply superb...
ArtMan
Posted 03 Apr 2012 08:31
Very nice work and a wonderful poem.
Mobius_NR
Posted 03 Apr 2012 07:47
This is well written and emotive.

DLizze
Posted 03 Apr 2012 07:10
Sometimes just the act of writing becomes a means of rescuing ourselves from our inner captor/selves. And when an outsider helps, Kharmic thought tells us both the rescuer and the rescuee become indebtedto one another. Because of that they are bound for life. I love the way this poem captures all of that, and find it quite moving.
Sisyphus
Posted 03 Apr 2012 05:28
So strong and self aware, your poems are reaching deeper, saying what you need to say in a quiet but powerful voice. It's good to see what is emerging from such a beautiful spirit. Keep writing.
mickeyfinn1
Posted 03 Apr 2012 05:06
Laura Lee .well written ..provocative thoughts..loved it

Buz
Posted 03 Apr 2012 05:03
Great job of writing LauraLee!

SydneySider
Posted 03 Apr 2012 02:15
That was just pure brilliance. I expected nothing less from you...
nazhinaz
Posted 02 Apr 2012 23:42
Great thought. I am here to rescue you back. Sugah, you simply marvellous. 5

LatinSugar
Posted 02 Apr 2012 23:26
As always..beautiful...
alexmarch
Posted 02 Apr 2012 21:43
Lovely and thought-provoking. Very moving. A strong voice comes through.
 

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