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Rose Petals on a Piano

Rose Petals on a Piano

Rose Petals on a Piano

To love you is to play a piano adorned with rose petals,
One must be gentle as the keys are depressed,
Yet must command them well,
The petals,
Beautiful to behold,
Gentle to brush lightly,
Soft to touch.

The beautiful music comes,
From the touch of the pianist,
The tone of the piano,
To the ear of the listener,
To their consciousness,

But the beauty is not just the music,
It is the sight,
The wood of the piano,
The black and white,
The stark contrast there,
Another in the red of the petals,
They are so different,
Yet they work so well,
Each adding to the others beauty.

To love you is to play a piano adorned with rose petals,
Beautiful in every way,
In the heavy bass,
The starlight treble,
The soft hands,
The lightness of the petals.

But should the player miss a note,
Misjudge the length of a crotchet,
Should a pedal be held too long,
A string snap,
The beauty is gone,
And who wants that?

So to love you is gentle,
But firm,
To trust you,
To know you,
To help you,
To make beautiful music.

To love you is to play a piano adorned with rose petals…

Written for LushStories by StillUndecided

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Posted 24 Feb 2013 07:17
Honey, this was beautiful.
Posted 16 Feb 2013 15:45
Some rather vivid imagery in there; have faith in the tunes that you play and never be worried about improvising!
Posted 10 Feb 2013 17:17
Such a beautiful poem. So vivid and sexy.
Posted 10 Feb 2013 17:16
Such a beautiful poem. So vivid and sexy.
Posted 05 Feb 2013 22:19
A beautiful poem and your thoughts are well expressed. Nice work.

Posted 04 Feb 2013 21:22
Beautifully played and so very seductive!
Posted 04 Feb 2013 05:38
Beautiful... softly but correctly played.

Posted 03 Feb 2013 09:22
This is a really beautiful poem. I like the idea of watching someone playing a piano and just watching the sounds come out. I can feel the passion behind the words, the emotion of the strength to love someone so much. Well done, Sarah.
Posted 03 Feb 2013 09:07
You made my heart beat faster. How you combined so many parts of you. Conveying love through words is more erotic than all the pictures in the world. Hope there is much more to come.

Posted 03 Feb 2013 09:02
It is beautiful. I don't know how you write like that.
Posted 03 Feb 2013 09:01
I can see the beauty of contrasting colors to convey your sensations of love. 5+++

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