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Senses

My first poem, feedback is greatly appreciated.
To see you is a reward for my eyes,
the dimples in your cheeks and the smile you always wear,
your shimmering eyes and long flowing hair,
and a nice firm body that'll give any man a rise

To hear you would be music to my ears,
an angelic voice that holds so much passion,
the way you laugh with such incredible fashion,
powerful enough to soothe even the worst of my fears

To touch you means a gift for my hands,
your smooth silky skin as soft as can be,
the way your body reacts when my hands roam free,
tells me your mind objects, but your body has other plans

To smell you would do wonders for my nose,
the smell of femininity, strawberries, and warm summer air,
a whiff here, a sniff there, a fragrance constructed with care,
I worship your scent, from your shampoo covered hair to your lotion covered toes

To taste you would be the greatest victory for my mouth,
my lips wouldn't even know where to begin,
I'd start at your neck, licking and sucking at your delicious skin,
and maybe, if you'll let me, I'll head a little farther south

See, hear, smell, taste, and touch,
senses that reveal whats fake and whats real,
these five words, these five little words, they show you how I really feel,
they not only explain the ways I love you, they also explain how much

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Comments(4)

Skorm4545
Posted 11 May 2011 23:02
Always good writing from you, and this poem has a good feel to it and a nice flow through the verses
lifeafterdeath
Posted 05 May 2011 19:07
Thats deep man, thats deep...
Aaannn
Posted 04 May 2011 23:31
This is good
manofdesire
Posted 04 May 2011 22:49
Really well writen and good poem. pleasure to read it and look forward to some more poetry.
 

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