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Shrouded

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You pace unseen

like the river hidden

behind its shroud of fog...

I hear you breathing

and

my heart's eye sees

your mouth....

and

long

to kiss it like

a butterfly resting there.....

can you feel my wings?

their light whisper

at the corner?

you stop.

finger tracing my eyebrow.

one word.

shrouded behind the fog.

cum.
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Piquet
Posted 07 Jan 2012 06:03
Well Done !

Frank_Lee
Posted 08 Dec 2011 21:21
beautiful. says it all...just the right way. thank you.

kaotik1
Posted 08 Dec 2011 16:59
thank you for sharing this with us. great job on your first one.. i hope to see more work from you..

agent1967
Posted 08 Dec 2011 11:04
Very well done!

PUSSYSPECIALIST
Posted 08 Dec 2011 10:39
good jod darling

ibee
Posted 08 Dec 2011 09:57
A finger tracing your mind..LL

Michael
Posted 08 Dec 2011 09:22
Very nicely written, I especially liked "to kiss it like a butterfly resting there".

DLizze
Posted 08 Dec 2011 08:09
Excellent, dear lady! And that is what it is all about - the depth of emotion expressed in little fleeting moments, like the touch of a butterfly

Mobius_NR
Posted 08 Dec 2011 04:45
Ah there's those wings in there! :-) Nice job Sugah!

Buz
Posted 08 Dec 2011 04:41
Great job Sugah!

nazhinaz
Posted 08 Dec 2011 04:19
Enjoyed the word, "cum". used beautifully.
 

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