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Siren Song

A redemption song, (with thanks to the poet John Mansfield...)
Siren Song

I must not go down to the sea again,
 I must not go down to the sea,
 For the waves they crash and mourn
 And The Sirens call to me....

The Full Moon still remembers you
 But I have cast you from my thoughts,
 Though you return to haunt my dreams,
 And dreams of you now count for naught.

Your smile remains inside my head
 And your song sings within my heart,
 They never were when we were one
 But mock me now that we're apart...

I must not go down to the sea again,
 I must not go down to the sea
 Because the waves they crash and mourn
 And The Sirens call to me...

I'll not surrender to this loss,
 I'll not surrender to this pain,
 For I have lost myself in you
 And I must find myself again.

xx S

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Saga
Posted 07 Jan 2013 19:26
I read this out loud. I every much enjoyed this poem.

Kiki
Posted 15 Jul 2012 12:16
Just thought of this masterpiece...! Actually had your singing version in my head...Even better!! x

Iszofia
Posted 22 Feb 2012 09:15
Beautiful! .. Strange 2 days it has been for me.. being drawn to reading love poems that speak of lost love and despite the heartache, I still sometimes carry around, this poem reminds why I'm better off being by myself.. particularly loved the 3rd and 5th stanza. Thank you ♥ Your song is beautiful too. You have great voice, soulful and raw

Piquet
Posted 03 Feb 2012 20:40
Very Good, almost like something by Tennyson - Loved It !

angeldust
Posted 03 Feb 2012 20:00
Nice very nice loved it

TracyAmes
Posted 29 Dec 2011 12:21
Well done, Steph. Be well. Hugs

AngelHeart01
Posted 27 Dec 2011 15:08
THANK YOU!!

ibee
Posted 27 Dec 2011 09:42
nice..lovely...thank you.

playsit
Posted 27 Dec 2011 03:02
I love the hauntingness of the third phrase... your words paint a vivid picture of the emotions swirling in your mind. 5+++

MissyLuvsYa
Posted 26 Dec 2011 18:21
Very good. Beautiful!

smiler77
Posted 26 Dec 2011 16:20
Oh crikey.. I totally get it.. it reminds me of my last heartbreak.. I know you'll find yourself again.. the writing helps.. You know that! x

HK4167
Posted 26 Dec 2011 09:45
So beautiful. I can feel all your emotion, heartbreaking sadness but so beautiful at same time that I have to read it again and again. Thanks for sharing this with us.

AngelHeart01
Posted 26 Dec 2011 08:49
I LOVE YOU!!! This is beautiful, perfect, and harrowing. Did I tell you, that I LOVE YOU?!!!

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nazhinaz
Posted 26 Dec 2011 07:59
"your song still sings in my heart" wow, what a beautiful song. Beautiful potraying of the sadness of loss felt by you. 5++++++. Wish I could give more.

Michael_X
Posted 26 Dec 2011 07:37
Very good , really enjoyed it
 

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