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So Goodbye.

Can we turn back somehow

And make up for all that we've been through

I feel that I've let you down

Or turned my back on you


But somehow things have to turn out right

You've got to believe me

The dreams I have at night

Are suddenly terrifying


But we've said all of our good-byes

We've gone over the memory

Apologized for any lies

And finally set each other free.


Maybe now I can move on

'Closure' is a funny thing

Now that you are gone

I can begin healing.





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Posted 10 Apr 2010 22:38
I thought and thought, trying to come up with the right words. They were right in the above comments. Touching, heartfelt and moving. There is truth in your words and wisdom in your soul. Thank you Lydia.
Posted 17 Feb 2010 18:29
Aww Sad but sort of happy cause of closure. Great poem
Posted 31 Jan 2010 12:02
So touching, so heartfelt. The pain come through. What a piece.
Posted 28 Jan 2010 19:40
Lovely. Very lovely.
Posted 27 Jan 2010 18:22
I know just how you feel Lydia and you wrote it very well.

Posted 27 Jan 2010 16:36
It is moving Lydia...I agree with Larry...I could feel your pain...
Posted 27 Jan 2010 16:08
wow.. Lydia.. you made me hurt reading this.. very well done.. I love poetry that requires emotion to understand it.. it really draws you in...

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