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So Much Perfect

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sometimes it IS just so much perfect

Palm trees whisper in the light breeze.
The heat of the day is gone but
moisture still clings to our bodies
and smells like who we really are.
The night is navy blue
and the moon rises out of the sea
like so much perfect....

We lay on the sand.
Your teeth bite my lips
and your mouth smiles on mine
as we breathe each other in.
You hold my hand to your heart
and I feel it beating for me
like so much perfect....

The heartbeats and kisses turn into more.
Your fingers press into my tight sheath
and the wet flows over them.
I beg you to enter me
as you bring me to orgasm
and you laugh as I cum
like so much perfect.....

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Comments(15)

angeldust
Posted 09 Mar 2012 13:18
great simply amazing
Sisyphus
Posted 10 Feb 2012 11:58
lovely, moves sweetly to the culminating ending which is so much perfect...
allinabout18times
Posted 10 Feb 2012 10:15
S, you definitely "have it". Excellent
alexmarch
Posted 09 Feb 2012 23:28
Beautiful...and perfect.
ibee
Posted 09 Feb 2012 22:42
hmmmm....This Yankee giggled with that laughter..more than purfect.

DLizze
Posted 09 Feb 2012 20:35
I would respectfully suggest it is the laughter and the orgasm together, that makes it like so much perfect. Just my two cents ....

Michael
Posted 09 Feb 2012 18:47
The laughter or the orgasm is "like so much perfect"? The answer is neither. Like so much perfect it is the nature of the relationship. A relationship of comfort where one is contented with smiles and climaxes, teases and happiness.

LatinSugar
Posted 09 Feb 2012 15:53
The beauty of the ocean combined with the passion...Excellent.
LauraLee_sugah
Posted 09 Feb 2012 13:49
you know no one has asked if the laughter or the orgasm is "like so much perfect"..... and i am not sure i know the answer...

Michael
Posted 09 Feb 2012 13:30
Ahh, my lusty lady strikes again, cleaving a tender line between love and lust; leaving just enough for us to hope for a little more out of life.
SecretDesire
Posted 08 Feb 2012 13:04
Excellent writing.... Loved it!
PUSSYSPECIALIST
Posted 08 Feb 2012 10:31
great poem

DLizze
Posted 08 Feb 2012 09:41
So sweet. Made me smile.

Buz
Posted 08 Feb 2012 05:01
I think you did an excellent job with this. Great poem!
nazhinaz
Posted 08 Feb 2012 00:07
Poetically it is very good, but conceptually I beg to disagree. It is the female which is closer to perfection than the male, as female bring life into being. 5
 

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