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Southern Rose

Blood red beauty
In the breeze
Dipping, swaying, dancing

Flower of dawn
And child of eve
Bending, blowing, whispering

Newborn bud
And blooming glory
Sighing, crying, wanting

The petals fall
The thorns remain
Wilting, dying, falling

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Posted 29 Dec 2013 00:55
The beautiful simplicity of the heart captured so well by your words. Excellent work!
Posted 29 Nov 2013 06:27
Cute and clever I must
Posted 11 Jan 2013 08:58
Beautiful, simply beautiful. Especiallt the last stanxa. Grear hope in future.5
Posted 02 Nov 2012 18:10
I love the tone of this piece. This poem is simple, well written, and brilliant! Great job, Meg, and thanks for sharing!
Posted 02 Nov 2012 16:47
This is my favorite thing you've written. Well... formally that is. Every time I read it gets more complex. I find the stem with only the thorns remaining to be just as elegant as the rose in bloom. Great imagery in such few words. Loved it Meggo!
Posted 01 Nov 2012 05:28
'Flower of dawn and child of eve' such imagination !! Lovely piece of work Meg. Brilliant.
Posted 27 Oct 2012 08:05
Nice Meg!

Posted 26 Oct 2012 19:51
Gorgeous sensual writing! A truly excellent poem!
Posted 26 Oct 2012 17:30
Simply beautiful....

Posted 26 Oct 2012 12:48
This was gorgeous to read, Meggie!!

You need to write more xxx

Your 5 was well deserved
Posted 26 Oct 2012 12:09

Posted 26 Oct 2012 11:10
A piece of perfection captured with such beauty. Lovely.
Posted 26 Oct 2012 08:16
Nice work meggie,

I didn't know you had so much to say.

Posted 26 Oct 2012 06:28
I agree, it's beautiful. Lovely to see the words blossom on the page. Nicely done.

Posted 26 Oct 2012 02:55
So gentle and delicate, different than your former work and I appreciate for showing us this side of you as well.
Posted 26 Oct 2012 01:45
This is beautiful work Meggie! The flow, rhythm, words it all fits perfectly. A little gem!
Posted 25 Oct 2012 20:18
sometimes the simplest poems are the ones that just get it perfect, convey so much in so few words, have so many layers of meaning - it's a art, you have nailed it perfectly. beautiful.

Posted 25 Oct 2012 19:28
So beautiful! I love the format and style of this poem - it was very effective in keeping it very lyrical and soft. The life of a rose is so much like love - breathtaking yet fragile. The thorns become more evident when the petals start to fall too... isn't that always the way? I think you captured the sentiments perfectly.

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