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Southern Rose

Blood red beauty
In the breeze
Dipping, swaying, dancing

Flower of dawn
And child of eve
Bending, blowing, whispering

Newborn bud
And blooming glory
Sighing, crying, wanting

The petals fall
The thorns remain
Wilting, dying, falling

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nazhinaz
Posted 11 Jan 2013 08:58
Beautiful, simply beautiful. Especiallt the last stanxa. Grear hope in future.5

Makavelli
Posted 02 Nov 2012 18:10
I love the tone of this piece. This poem is simple, well written, and brilliant! Great job, Meg, and thanks for sharing!

Magical_felix
Posted 02 Nov 2012 16:47
This is my favorite thing you've written. Well... formally that is. Every time I read it gets more complex. I find the stem with only the thorns remaining to be just as elegant as the rose in bloom. Great imagery in such few words. Loved it Meggo!

underthehood
Posted 01 Nov 2012 05:28
'Flower of dawn and child of eve' such imagination !! Lovely piece of work Meg. Brilliant.

ponyboy
Posted 27 Oct 2012 08:05
Nice Meg!

sisters
Posted 27 Oct 2012 05:31
Simple... beautiful...

Buz
Posted 26 Oct 2012 19:51
Gorgeous sensual writing! A truly excellent poem!

HK4167
Posted 26 Oct 2012 17:30
Simply beautiful....

Hotstuff
Posted 26 Oct 2012 14:20
Beautiful..

Mazza
Posted 26 Oct 2012 12:48
This was gorgeous to read, Meggie!!

You need to write more xxx

Your 5 was well deserved

Weretiger
Posted 26 Oct 2012 12:13
nice

LauraLee_sugah
Posted 26 Oct 2012 12:09
lovely...

ShyVixen
Posted 26 Oct 2012 11:10
A piece of perfection captured with such beauty. Lovely.

scooter
Posted 26 Oct 2012 08:16
Nice work meggie,

I didn't know you had so much to say.

CurlyGirly
Posted 26 Oct 2012 06:28
I agree, it's beautiful. Lovely to see the words blossom on the page. Nicely done.

She
Posted 26 Oct 2012 02:55
So gentle and delicate, different than your former work and I appreciate for showing us this side of you as well.

Kiki
Posted 26 Oct 2012 01:45
This is beautiful work Meggie! The flow, rhythm, words it all fits perfectly. A little gem!

sprite
Posted 25 Oct 2012 20:18
sometimes the simplest poems are the ones that just get it perfect, convey so much in so few words, have so many layers of meaning - it's a art, you have nailed it perfectly. beautiful.

Dancing_Doll
Posted 25 Oct 2012 19:28
So beautiful! I love the format and style of this poem - it was very effective in keeping it very lyrical and soft. The life of a rose is so much like love - breathtaking yet fragile. The thorns become more evident when the petals start to fall too... isn't that always the way? I think you captured the sentiments perfectly.
 

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