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Still 'When'

Something changed,
It stopped working.
Summer was hard and
We couldn't go back.

I tried to deny it
But I knew it was coming.
It didn't make it easier
When we finally parted.

It's going to take time
For me to be okay.
I will be okay, though;
Maybe even good.

You'll never lose me
From your life.
We're intertwined now,
Forever.

You're my 'forever girl'
And I, your 'forever guy'.
Sadly, we realised
'Forever' isn't now.

In years to come,
The time will be right
And it will be better
Than it ever was before.

When that time comes,
I'll be ready for you.
Yes, it's still 'when',
Not 'if'.
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CurlyGirly
Posted 14 Nov 2012 15:31
I tried to deny it, but I knew it was coming. We all do that, don't we? sigh Well done!
S2B
Posted 19 Oct 2012 12:49
Powerful words spoken true! I been there...

Jayne33
Posted 29 Sep 2012 10:30
This really pulled on my heart, I can connect well with it. As always really really well written. Hugs x x x

VanGogh
Posted 19 Sep 2012 07:32
I hate it when you feel that "change" happening! Good poem!

SweetPenny
Posted 14 Sep 2012 14:06
Beautiful poem. Straight from your heart.

Milik_Redman
Posted 14 Sep 2012 05:35
Very heartfelt. Well done, though I am certain it was painful to write

stephanie
Posted 12 Sep 2012 12:30
Bonnie Lad, I know the feeling, though you express it more eloquently than I could... (Ellipsis included to make you smile!)

Keep your chin up and please come back to us soon.

xx Steph

Kal-El85
Posted 12 Sep 2012 06:24
Great poem. It's sweet with style.
Coco
Posted 12 Sep 2012 05:29
Very nice Clum. I like that it shows the cycle of love, a promise of more to come. Sweet.

avrgblkgrl
Posted 12 Sep 2012 04:18
Very nicely put. That last line lingers. Beautiful.

Buz
Posted 10 Sep 2012 18:49
That's excellent writing Callum!
LauraLee_sugah
Posted 10 Sep 2012 17:53
holy smoke...... "summer was hard and we can't go back." this is wonderful... i know that "when" not "if" part... omg...

Shylass
Posted 10 Sep 2012 16:44
MustangGT
Posted 10 Sep 2012 16:01
Awesome dude!

crazydiamond
Posted 10 Sep 2012 14:05

crazydiamond
Posted 10 Sep 2012 13:54
I get this... I get this ! xx
 

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